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New to music production and want to see what people think

Cookmeister

Hey people, I'm new to all this music production and I made these tracks using a DAW over the past week or two. Please keep in mind that they are NOT mastered yet and I am open to all positive criticism. Just let me know what ye think.

Cheers

http://soundcloud.com/cookmeister-1/sets/first-mixes

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krd

Cookmeister wrote: »

Hey people, I'm new to all this music production and I made these tracks using a DAW over the past week or two. Please keep in mind that they are NOT mastered yet and I am open to all positive criticism. Just let me know what ye think.

Cheers

http://soundcloud.com/cookmeister-1/sets/first-mixes

You need, an over-wrought over the top 80s gothic vocal over the tune.

Then you need to get 500 copies printed on 12" vinyl - stored in a warehouse that mysteriously burns down.

There will only be three copies left - two of which you'll know the whereabouts of - the other will be in a Goth bar, in Amsterdam, that I really like,

It needs a goth vocal -- which I know you are burning to do yourself, but you haven't magic'd up the balls yet.

Cookmeister

krd wrote: »

You need, an over-wrought over the top 80s gothic vocal over the tune.

Then you need to get 500 copies printed on 12" vinyl - stored in a warehouse that mysteriously burns down.

There will only be three copies left - two of which you'll know the whereabouts of - the other will be in a Goth bar, in Amsterdam, that I really like,

It needs a goth vocal -- which I know you are burning to do yourself, but you haven't magic'd up the balls yet.

Huh?

krd

Cookmeister wrote: »

Huh?

It needs a goth vocal.

I really like that filtered arp

how'd you do it?

paddyhunt

Good first effort! By any chance did you record it in garageband? I think i recognise that kick and snare!

Basically you need to EQ your kick better.... scoop out some of the low mids, boost it a bit around 80Hz to give it more 'thump' and also give it more click by boosting around 2.5KHz. Try layering different kick samples so that it cuts through the mix more. Also the snare is very week... you need a better snare sample.

But overall well done.

This was a review of track 12 by the way

Cookmeister

Ok so here's a little compilation of what I've done...just click on the link below and give them a listen if yer interested and let me know what ye think!

Cheers guys!

http://bit.ly/SoundsFromSyria