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My first go - title "The Madman?"

padraiggg

Chapter 1

A man in a hat entered the room. He took off the hat. “It's you!” They all said. At the same time like a class speaking to a teacher. “Hahaha Hello gentleman”, the man in the hat said, putting the hat on the table. “And hello ladies he said. Turning to the ladies and lifting his hat politely. “Leave us alone Trent!” The women said. Perhaps it was because the were angry at him for something he had done in the past, a long, long time ago. Or perhaps it was because he was holding a gun at them! The gun came from nowhere. He had got it out of his pocket and now both bullets were aimed at the people.”Say your prayers!” The man said but one of the men grabbed the gun, knocking the table with the hat on it and some other things on the floor. A vase got broken. Now the gun was in the other hands and we would have to wait and see if it was the right hands.

got this far, now got to work out what happens next!

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DeBunny

This guy has to hold the record for the most thanked. Certainly in relation to the amount of posts he has. Can anyone confirm?

Ireland isn't a nation of begrudgers, it's a nation of fupin' weirdos.

padraiggg

another chaopter on the website now. i didnt do one for a while bcause there was a holiday and i was on it

http://www.trentsadventures.com/

pickarooney

Good to have you back padraiggg

Ash_M

"Some sex was already happening on her."

God I love Trent. Great to have an update padraiggg!

r3nu4l

I lolled a few times during that...

Trent put some piano wire on the baddies neck “dont do that its not what its supposed to be fooo…” started to say (the henchman) but it was to late his throat was on the floor so he couldnt use it. And he was dead!

On a serious point...if you want to take this anywhere maxneil then you need to start looking at tidying up obvious typos. The inaccuracies in grammar I can get over, some of the spelling typos spoil it though.

kerash

Some bits of sandwich landed on the baddies carpet. trent didnt care though it wasnt his house
Thank you Padraiggg

r3nu4l wrote: »

I lolled a few times during that...

On a serious point...if you want to take this anywhere maxneil then you need to start looking at tidying up obvious typos. The inaccuracies in grammar I can get over, some of the spelling typos spoil it though.

Who's maxneil

Feeona

I love this story!

Are the typos and grammar mistakes not all part of the Legend though? If Trent doesn't care about a baddies carpet, I can't imagine him worrying about being in a story with typos and bad grammar : )

fingalgooner

Was looking for clues about publishing and getting agents for a piece of work i am near to completing and found this. And while my head was full of mush with regards to all the conflicting advice i was finding on different sites i was lucky to discover this. spent the last five hours laughing, crying and trying to explain to my daughter that i was alright and did not need an ambulance.
Cheers Padraigg,
Snapkick:D

Hermy

The saga continues.
Worth waiting for.:):D

Hermy

r3nu4l wrote: »

On a serious point...if you want to take this anywhere maxneil then you need to start looking at tidying up obvious typos. The inaccuracies in grammar I can get over, some of the spelling typos spoil it though.

It just woodn't bee Trent's adventures. if it was writted any other weigh!:o:p

Tar.Aldarion

god I love your story padraig

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padraiggg wrote: »

i didnt do one for a while bcause there was a holiday and i was on it

Has anyone ever heard the story about Brian Wilson (of The Beach Boys) who stopped his car and wept after hearing The Beatles' Strawberry Fields Forever because he realised that they had already done what he was trying to achieve with his own work? That's how I felt reading that post.

af_thefragile

Feeona wrote: »

I love this story!

Are the typos and grammar mistakes not all part of the Legend though? If Trent doesn't care about a baddies carpet, I can't imagine him worrying about being in a story with typos and bad grammar : )

Exactly. All of the inaccuracies reflect Trent's character. Its instinctive. Trent doesn't have time to think. He's like Nike. He just does it!

Poor Uncle Tom

Trent = Horatio on acid...

nuf sed..

Scarydoll

Just finished reading the latest installment. T'was awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Denerick

This Padraig fellow is very funny. Some people have taken this too seriously (Including people I like) The story is bad, cliche ridden etc. but genius! The epitome of bad writing - living proof that some writing can be so bad and yet be good!

If only Andy Mc Nab followed this line of thinking. THousands more would read his novels because he would be as transparant as hell in saying they are ****e. Trent is the man!

Denerick

Also:

Thanked 1,185 Times in 26 Posts

Has to be a record..

staker

Just seen this(seeing as bad grammar is allowed)
Trent's the man Padraigg, what's he been up to since Christmas??

padraiggg

I dont want to give to much away but theres a new episode

http://www.trentsadventures.com/

pickarooney

Have you taken the hump or is Trent too powerful to post directly on thread?

padraiggg

No the opposite my friend made the site when everyone on here was arguing there wsa to much trent stuff so i started sending them to him to put on there if people wanted to make lots of comments

pickarooney

Yeah, I see what you mean.

kerash

"tiger style hurricane kick."
"Just then the queen elizabeth saw all of this and trent seduced her easily with a tip of his hat and she had 17 children off him."

Thank you Padraiggg

Scarydoll

“Hello Trent ive been expecting you” said a voice it was coming from in the speakers above Trents head. He could tell it was the boss beacuse it was his voice that was speaking.

Yay another installment! T'was epic:D

Jackobyte

The boss said “henchmen, take him away!” but about 38 seconds went by and nothing had happened then he realised all his henchmen were unconscious because of the gas! he quickly employed some new conscious henchmen and said the take him away command again

LOL!

Jay P

Trent better not die.

RayCon

ha ha ... I laughed out loud at some moments of this "adventure" ...

my favourite part :

he turned round a man was standing there wearing some brand new €134 trousers

Hrududu

The people in the base couldnt breathe because of the gas, except trent he had thrown the gas so was expecting it and wearing a mask, and the boss who had a gas mask but not the other people because he didnt want to buy them all one he had just paid a big national insurance bill and he wasnt going to go spending silly money on masks and things.

Just feckin' brilliant.

peanuthead

Oh my god!!! Hahahahahahaha - the audio!!!

Classic!! This stuff is gold!

Tigger

He could tell it was the boss beacuse it was his voice that was speaking