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Back to Creative Writing: Mitchell, The Mad Man

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  • 22-12-2012 11:23pm
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    Moderators, Computer Games Moderators, Technology & Internet Moderators Posts: 19,240 Mod ✭✭✭✭


    So I've decided to endulge in some creative writing. I pondered for most of the day, a new story of Mad Mitchell. It's early days for the story day and has a dark back story, but in time I hope to develop the story to make use of it's beginning and become more humorous.

    Feel free to provide any and all feed back and let me know what you all think.
    Mitchell slowly ambled from his pickup truck towards the tree line, adjusting the gun bag on his shoulder. He would spend aweekend sharpening up on his hunting skills in a Red wood forest just out side of Boulder Creek. Isolation was a preference and he would leave the truck behind. Mitchell was in his 30’s and quite intelligent, too intelligent. His planning was meticulous, down to the finest detail. He thought on his feet and had a contingency plan for every possible scenario any man could conceive.

    Knowing that it would take approximately one hour to walk roughly two mile through thick forest, he took his bearing as due north and set off. With a survival pack on his back also, he needed little else to get by. He would acquire his own food and clean water.

    Coming close to the hour, Mitchell was pacing his way through low laying the vegetation, counting his steps. Fifty-seven steps to fifty-eight steps for every one hundred meters. A brisk 2 mile walkwas equivalent to 3.2 kilometres and Mitchell was close. He approached an area that gave the best coverage from wind and rain. He would set up here for the night.

    Placing everything down and within reach, he pulled a side arm from his back pack, ensuring it was loaded, but safe. A 9mm heckler and gloch, only new, he placed in an under arm holster for quick access. Hebegan to set up a low laying hammock between two trees and a poncho to shield himself from the fresh breeze during the night. While Boulder Creek was hot during the day and unbearably so at times, it become exceptionally cold at night.

    Having set up his camp, it was time to catch ameal before nightfall. He would look for something small, a squirrel or similar. He didn’t believe in hunting larger animals, as he wanted to leave the smallest foot print on his surroundings as possible. To leave nothing behind is much better. No one could know that he or anyone was here. As he travelled from his camp, he left markers, small and hard to spot. Each marker when found, pointed he him to his next marker and he would collect these again when he returned.

    After two hours of laying traps and quiet contemplation, it was his time to think as he waited to sneer his next meal. He laid multiple traps and acquired two squirrels. He packed up the rest and returned to the camp, collecting the markers as he went.

    While his meal cooked in a dug out pit he couldcover up later, he ensured that his equipment as packed away and the remaining waste were buried with what he could produce on his own. No evidence of his presence left behind.

    It was time to settle down and eat, but all Mitchell could do was think. For him, hunting was like shooting fish in abarrel, it was too easy. As a serial killer, many of his victims provided no challenge what so ever. Mitchell once worked for agencies, highly interested inhis skills after a stint in the Military. As an agent of death with the CIA, his skills developed to a level never seen before. He could make a murder look like a heart attack and leave no questionable trace of being in the area.

    He was a ghost. His past didn’t leave him witha good up bringing either. A victim of abuse as a child, he developed so much hate for the world. Through his extraordinary level of intelligence, he learned quickly and could read into every situation presented to him. It was approaching a time in his life, in which he was displeased with his actions andhe wanted a change. He knew that one day, it would all catch up to him. Thetime to quit was now. No one would ever figure, that the inconspicuous death of atleast 15 CIA targets was his doing. With secrecy the order of the day, the CIA wouldn’t spill the beans, that he did know and he could hold them to it with black mail if he needed to.

    The following morning and well rested, he began to pack up camp. He always ensured that he had little to pack up, so he could move out quickly. Before he left, he scoured the area to ensure it was clean,as he found it. From memory, he remembered that if he walked 3 miles in a southwesterly direction, he would be closer to town and on his to a new location. With the truck left behind and his only possessions being the clothes on hisback, a gun bag, a back pack and some money he had acquired, he looked like nothing more than a hitchhiker.
    * * *

    At the junction in Boulder Creek, for Saratoga and Santa Cruz, he thought about it for a moment, and then walked towards the gas station to pick up some supplies and change for the bus. When he returned to the junction, he flipped a coin. By the time it landed in his palm, he knew where he wanted to go. He walked down the streettowards the bus for Santa Cruz. Pulling out a dollar and fifty cents for the bus ticket, he shoved it in his pocket and he waited patiently. When he arrived in Santa Cruz, he would pawn off his rifle as hehad no further use for it. He contemplated what he would do, where he would go. Mitchell needed a new life for himself and it was this weekend that has swayed his decision, a decision he has been trying to make for some time now.

    No more dirty work! It was time to get rid of those items that weighted him down and give thought to the rest of his life. He spent some much time analysing short term issues, it was time to think more long term.


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  • Moderators, Computer Games Moderators, Technology & Internet Moderators Posts: 19,240 Mod ✭✭✭✭L.Jenkins


    Mitchell sat at the end of the Santa Cruz beach boardwalk, twiddling his thumbs over a black coffee while he looked to the horizon. The grunt and groans of the local seal population further back did nothing to distract him from his thoughts; neither did the droves of people walking about the pier enjoying the summer heat. Some what bored, he didn’t quite know what to do with his time. In a past life, if he wasn’t being provided with orders, he was filling his time by hunting and generally being elusive. Either way, he needed something to do,but couldn’t exactly advertise it and knocking off a few people certainly wouldn’t help matters. Legal or not and even in the name of the CIA, it was still murder.



    It was nearing 7pm and he was feeling hungry.It was time to leave behind another evening on the pier staring into the abyss.The grunts of the young seal pup finding their voice grew loader as Mitchell approached dry land. Slowly letting go of a life ruled by order and discipline,Mitchell felt compelled to imitate the seals as he looked through the cracks in the pier. Hoping for a reaction, the grunt of seals beneath him echoed all around, as he called to them in his best low pitched grunt possible. With a small grin as he continued walking, the feeling of hunger grew on him.



    On his adventures through town in the week gone by, he found an Irish Pub on Pacific Avenue; Rosie McCanns. An attempt at providing customers with an Irish experience, the pub was nothing was simply a restaurant that served alcohol on the side. First, he would have a browse around Borders bookstore just up the street. He thought too much and needed something to occupy himself during this extended idle period. Reading was the best thing he could think of to fill his time and he was looking for something else to read, as he devoured3 books since last weekend. He had a fondness for horror. No one knew horror quite like Stephen King. This time around, he was interested in the gunslinger series and also had a soft spot for fantasy. With his basket of books, enough for two weeks of reading, Mitchell was happy with the purchase he was about to make.



    * * *



    Marie stood shuffling at the check-out,compiling sales and credit card receipts for later on. Frustrated with the idea of another evening making sure that till sales matched receipts, she thought how nice it would be to just close up at 8pm and do it in the morning. Her manager didn’t appreciate waiting and had let Marie know on more than one occasion. She made up her mind and waiting for the morning to compile sales reports wasn’t worth the trouble. With a sigh, she packed away the receipts into a folder and stashed it under the counter.



    Mitchell approached the counter with enough books to start a small library. Marie never paid much attention to the occasional visitor to the city, who walked through the doors. Santa Cruz was a tourist town after all and Borders attracted many new faces Marie had only ever seen once. Mitchell had been around for two weeks now and made a couple of visits to pick up a couple of books. Never really interested in joining a library, he enjoyed indulging himself in a coffee as he browsed the aisles. Marie decided that Mitchell had an kind of mysterious quality about him and she had idea that he would be staying in the area for awhile.



    “Hi, will that be all?” Marie stood almost twitching at the counter as Mitchell put down his choice of reading for at least another two weeks. Mitchell wasn’t quite as smooth with social situations, despite his intelligence. He spent enough time almost comatose in front of the television, well enough time in which he could compare himself with Sheldon Cooper from The Big Bang Theory, but some what less awkward.



    “Yeah, it will! Just a little light reading for the next week or so.” Light reading she thought to herself as she began to gather the books from the pile, one by one to scan them. Who was this guy, John Nash? “Stephen King doesn’t look much like light reading!”



    “What can I say, I love to read.” Not big on small talk, he impatiently waited on Marie to complete the order, so he could leave. He was starved and didn’t want to delay any longer. “So will you be around again?” Marie’s curiosity for Mitchell was growing with each visit to the store. “Maybe, I intend on holding up here for a while, until I figure out what I plan on doing with myself.” The small talk was really grating on his nerves.



    “I’ll see you again soon then!” Marie could sense Mitchell was in no mood to talk. He never made eye contact once. With a slight grin, she handed over the books. “That will be $50.” With a quick shuffle for some cash, he handed over fifty dollars and took his books. With a quick smile,he walked towards the door without looking back at Marie, “Bye, talk to you soon.” Any form socialising made Mitchell feel awkward and he was thankful to be heading towards Rosie McCanns.



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