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An Epipfiny (or some sorta thing)

  • 04-08-2020 6:43pm
    #1
    Registered Users Posts: 252 ✭✭


    1
    We were tripping on mushrooms.
    Still young, still fearless, haw haw.
    Only thing was, back then,
    we didn't know much about anything.

    2
    I had an epipfiny,
    or some sorta thing.
    -Existence is fluid!-
    So I told my friends.

    3
    We laughed as we swam
    through the murky haze.


Comments

  • Registered Users Posts: 252 ✭✭hgfj


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 1,429 ✭✭✭Sheridan81


    Comes across as unfinished, unpolished, unrealised, just a embryo of a poem rather than an actual poem; an idea, not a finished product that entices and evokes. It doesn't emote or say anything profound.


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