are my poems any good or nah

Have to agree with Bodhidharma, first one feels like an attack of thesaurus. Second one is more approachable, both of them sound like raps rather than poetry, but hey, it is whatever you want it to be. Keep on writing!
Kieran

Honest Opinion.

What I love. The last line of the second poem.

I long for her to stay, delay.
To come, and to play.

I feel that line is perfect. I love it.

I am unsure what effect you want the poems to have on the reader. Or if any. But i can tell you I find the flow of the language in some of the lines jarring. Which can be a good thing if you want it to be that way.

It doesn't feel like an attack of a thesaurus. But sometimes when we write ...we stop and go ...'hmm what is the word i am looking for ..that will do' and there is no lead into it. So it doesn't flow as easy when read. But that isn't a bad thing if that is what you want.

The commas seem inserted in odd ways. But again this could be your choice.

Addicted to subjective transparency,
Afflicted by nonstop heresy.

I like this. I dont know why I like it though. What is subjective transparency? Could you make this phrase more meaningful ? Sometimes its not so much what words mean as the way we give meaning to them in the way we write.

Could you use this phrase in a metaphor and make it live??

Addicted to mirrors of subjective transparency. Or Addicted to staring in windows of subjective transparency. ???

A generation built on building processors,
Procured an arena of entrapment for the encumbent.

Do you mean incumbent or encumbant?

I prefer encumbant means a period of battle or tension. The encumbant battle. Incumbant is someone put upon by obligation.
Procured in the arena of entrapment for the encumbant battle. Or procured in the arena of entrapment for the incumbent young.

But maybe these are not the effects you want. How you want the reader to read it in their head etc. What you want their brain to do.

YES! I like it though. I think its good

Its very very special!