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Insatiable

  • 10-01-2005 4:37am
    #1
    Closed Accounts Posts: 602 ✭✭✭


    Insatiable



    Pins and Needles
    A warmth, intensifying, rising.
    Pleasure, but never enough.

    The day it reaches my mind,
    I shall be free.
    Life mission fulfilled.

    I try. Sometimes I get close.
    But always the disappointment,
    as I shudder and thrash,
    when the feeling begins to fade away.

    I am Insatiable.


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  • Closed Accounts Posts: 10,730 ✭✭✭✭simu


    I like it!
    Pins and Needles
    A warmth, intensifying, rising.
    Pleasure, but never enough.

    I'd take out the comma between warmth and intensifying above - it looks wrong to me (but this could also be my mind raving at 5am)!


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