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Dear Child

  • 29-12-2004 12:54pm
    #1
    ven0m
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,828 ✭✭✭


    Dear child,
    The corrected one,
    My unborn son,
    We were to be a family,
    You, your mom & me,
    Mommy wasn't strong enough,
    I wasn't even told,
    You did nothing wrong,
    And were disposed of,
    left dead, unborn & cold,
    You were conceived in love,
    You were to be raised there too,
    Sorry I've no answers for you,
    What was I supposed to do,
    I grieved & mourned for you,
    Cried a stream of tears too.

    You coulda been a daughter,
    I just don't know,
    Didn't know you died,
    Was only a week later,
    When mommy told me,
    Coldness in her eyes,
    Iced look on her face,
    Leaving me broken,
    upset & feeling disgraced,
    She's not sorry unlike me,
    Each day I pray for you,
    my child, you my unborn seed.


    ::: ven0mous :::


Comments

  • #2
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    *tear
    Every line opens another page to the story,
    I can see where the pain and torture is coming from now
    Writing is therapy and you have been getting a lot out...when its harder to write about then you will know how far you have come along.

    You should definitley bind all of this work together and make it a chapter in your life learned.
    save the pages for your book one, it will come...the story of your life in poetry ;)


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