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Smile For Me Now

  • 09-12-2004 1:42pm
    #1
    ven0m
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,828 ✭✭✭


    Te Queiro, as I find my peace in remembering that first kiss,
    the first moment between us that began to exist,
    deep into those brown eyes the feeling was right,
    let my heart go to you feel your heat at night,
    woke up next to you in bliss seeing that wide smile,
    sharing the first mornings kiss & walks with your hand in mine,
    the instant soulful feeling & connection,
    picture in my mind a state of perfection,
    born heavenly was this one girl,
    reminded me how to feel again in my world,
    What we thought was fate was just a distraction,
    in a bubble we created to a mutual satisfaction,
    too many problems & so little time,
    falling for you was my only crime,
    what was I supposed to do, how would you see it,
    you put me thourgh it all & didn't mean it,
    two talks loaded by the same bullet & gun,
    was it nothing more than meaningless fun?
    worried & scared I was never prepared,
    but for you know I'll always care,
    confused by what you don't know or couldn't understand,
    scared by a one who would show how he felt & be the man,
    that you always wanted but never had,
    picking you up, making you smile when you felt bad,
    Left me, my mind & my heart on the road broken down,
    say no good byes, no tears in those wide eyes,
    I take my bow, see ya later - just smile for me now.


    ::: ven0mous :::


Comments

  • #2
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    omg!
    Brilliant...you just keep coming out with such great work...I am more than impressed.
    I can see into the work and hope that your heart heals soon, by the way you are expressing your feelings reminds me very much of myself.
    Keep it up, and please do something with this talent of yours...dont let it go to waste like so many of us do!


  • #3
    ven0m
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,828 ✭✭✭ven0m


    BEAT wrote:
    omg!
    Brilliant...you just keep coming out with such great work...I am more than impressed.
    I can see into the work and hope that your heart heals soon, by the way you are expressing your feelings reminds me very much of myself.
    Keep it up, and please do something with this talent of yours...dont let it go to waste like so many of us do!

    I'm not good at dealing with my problems & end up going into mad self-destructive periods, but the one thing I've always been able to do is write. I just pick up a pen & words come flowing out & there's very little thought.... I know I'm done when I stop, cos it just all comes in a mad rush to me & the writing continues for as long as it does & that's it...

    Thanks for the feedback & words of encouragement - means alot...


    ::: ven0mous :::


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