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A Few Poems By Me

MrVestek · 2004-12-06 23:33:05

It's been a while since I wrote these poems but I just recently retreaved them from an old mac and was wondering what you guys think. I came second in a national competition for the 'Tallaght' one. Comments invited please :-)

06-12-2004 11:33pm

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It's been a while since I wrote these poems but I just recently retreaved them from an old mac and was wondering what you guys think. I came second in a national competition for the 'Tallaght' one.

Comments invited please :-)

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#2 07-12-2004 12:10am

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I know you have posted those here before because I remember reading those exact poems.
I dislike the first one totally...It is too difficult to read...because of the way you place your words and commas etc..

I have commented on the others in past posts.

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#3 07-12-2004 12:11am

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I think i posted two of them before...

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