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A Christmas tale

  • 17-12-2020 2:18pm
    #1
    Freddio
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 648 ✭✭✭


    Hi Folks,

    If you only have 5 minutes, I hope you like this . . ..

    flashliterature.com/latest


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  • #2
    echo beach
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,252 ✭✭✭echo beach


    A perfect little story to bring a smile. Thank you.


  • #3
    Gemancy
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 66 ✭✭Gemancy


    Freddio wrote: »
    Hi Folks,

    If you only have 5 minutes, I hope you like this . . ..

    flashliterature.com/latest

    Enjoyed that, thank you!
    Happy Christmas 🎄


  • #4
    km85264
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 146 ✭✭km85264


    Freddio wrote: »
    Hi Folks,

    If you only have 5 minutes, I hope you like this . . ..

    flashliterature.com/latest

    You have a wonderful site there, well done on setting it up and keeping it going. The story will have real appeal to younger children; there’s nothing like the mention of poo to get them going :-)
    I’m not sure about the structure, introduced by an adult voice that then disappears. Perhaps a simpler structure would work better.
    Kieran


  • #5
    Freddio
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 648 ✭✭✭Freddio


    Thanks Kieran,

    High praise !!!

    All these stories are on the fly in that they are all train of thought. They aren't planned when I sit down to write them.


  • #6
    km85264
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 146 ✭✭km85264


    Freddio wrote: »
    Thanks Kieran,

    High praise !!!

    All these stories are on the fly in that they are all train of thought. They aren't planned when I sit down to write them.

    That’s definitely a good approach, it must be very rewarding. For me personally, nothing goes online without extensive rework and rereading, a very slow process.


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