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US country style lyric

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    Registered Users Posts: 103 ✭✭ sephsleft06


    hi,
    any feedback wld be great. I'm trying to finish the song outright, nearly done. And will try and give it, to Ralph Murphy or the likes. He turns up at IMRO workshops occasionaly

    thanks


    What We Have


    We slowly shake our heads
    Holdin' what's left of our Friday paycheck
    Powers cut off, red candle glows and melts
    Down to our table top again
    (but) In a half-light
    There’s an outline, of your full smile
    We talk all-night, but we know it's midnight or near
    When you slip my shoes off with your feet

    And when I think about,
    ‘bout What We Have
    …There’s a risin’ feelin’ in my chest
    …been risin’ since we met
    When I think about, ohh what we have
    Baby we’ve this spontanaity
    Makin’ bubbles rise in our beer


    The cable bill' is still unpaid
    So we make up silly games
    the Dim light from our opened fridge door
    Throws our shadows above the floor

    And when I think about,
    ‘bout what we have
    …There’s a risin’ feelin’ in my chest
    it’s been risin’ since we met
    When I think about, ohh what we have
    Baby we’ve this spontanaity
    Makin’ bubbles rise in our beer

    We know what we have
    But you won't let
    me finish this sentence
    cause you'll cut in… with a kiss

    We may not got a whole lot in this home
    But we've got so much to give

    And when I think about, ‘bout what we have
    …There’s a risin’ feelin’ in my chest
    it’s been risin’ since we met
    When I think about, ohh what we have
    Baby we’ve this spontanaity
    Makin’ bubbles rise in our beer


    We know what we have
    But you won't have…
    me finish this sentence..
    cause you'll cut in… with a kiss


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