An t-Ózón le Máire Ãine Nic Ghearailt translation

AislingE

Hi im trying to study An tózón, i have done barely any poems in school! So im doing it by myself:/ Could anyone give me complete translation and sample answer to it please?Heres the poem

An t-Òzón

Mise an tózón
Anseo i làr na spèire
Rinne Dia fadó mé
Chun tusa a shaoradh
Ó iomarca gréine
Agus nithe gránna eile

Táim ag rá leat
Aire a thabhairt
Dod chomharsanacht
Don domhan
Mar cónaíonn tú ann
Agus tá sè ag brath ort

Ná loit rud ar bith
Nár chruthaigh tú
Glac mo chomhairle
Agus mairfidh tú
Mairfimid uile
Mar a ceapadh dúinn

Jijsaw

Here is my translation:
Me the ozone,
Here in the sky,
God made me a long time ago,
To save you,
From too much sun,
And other nasty/horrible things.

I'm telling you,
Take care,
Of the environment,
Of the world,
Because you live there
And it's depending on you.

Don't destroy anything,
That you didn't make/create
Take my advice
And you'll survive,
We'll all survive
As we expect

There you go :cool:

AislingE

Jijsaw wrote: »

Here is my translation:
Me the ozone,
Here in the sky,
God made me a long time ago,
To save you,
From too much sun,
And other nasty/horrible things.

I'm telling you,
Take care,
Of the environment,
Of the world,
Because you live there
And it's depending on you.

Don't destroy anything,
That you didn't make/create
Take my advice
And you'll survive,
We'll all survive
As we expect

There you go :cool:

Thanks so much, lifesaver

DublinArnie

Jijsaw wrote: »

Here is my translation:
Me the ozone,
Here in the sky,
God made me a long time ago,
To save you,
From too much sun,
And other nasty/horrible things.

I'm telling you,
Take care,
Of the environment,
Of the world,
Because you live there
And it's depending on you.

Don't destroy anything,
That you didn't make/create
Take my advice
And you'll survive,
We'll all survive
As we expect

There you go :cool:

Did you translate that your self? :eek::eek::eek::eek:

sotisme

AislingE wrote: »

Hi im trying to study An tózón, i have done barely any poems in school! So im doing it by myself:/ Could anyone give me complete translation and sample answer to it please?Heres the poem

An t-Òzón

Mise an tózón
Anseo i làr na spèire
Rinne Dia fadó mé
Chun tusa a shaoradh
Ó iomarca gréine
Agus nithe gránna eile

Táim ag rá leat
Aire a thabhairt
Dod chomharsanacht
Don domhan
Mar cónaíonn tú ann
Agus tá sè ag brath ort

Ná loit rud ar bith
Nár chruthaigh tú
Glac mo chomhairle
Agus mairfidh tú
Mairfimid uile
Mar a ceapadh dúinn

Rinne mé staidéar ar an dán 'An t-Ózón atá scríofa ag Maire Aine Nic Ghearailt. Is léir go bhfuil fearg mar mhothúcháin mar tá sé ann le brath síos tríd an dáin ar fad.
Is é an ciséal ózóin atá ag caint sa dán seo. Usáideann an file pearsantú nuair a chuireann sí an dán i mbéal an ózóin.
Tá an tÓzon ag insint dúinn go bhfuil sé ann chun an domhain ar fad a chosaint ón ghriain agus rudaí dáinséarach eile
"Chun tusa a shaoradh
O iomarca gréine
Agus nithe gránna eile"
Ach tá fearg air mar ní thugann an cine daonna go leor comhairle dó. Dar leis, tá siad ag deanamh dochar don timpeallacht agus agscriosadh an t-imshaol.
Tugann sé orduithe dúinn aire a tabhairt leis an timpeallacht. Má glacann daoine leis a chomhairle, beidh gach daoine slán sábhailte
"Glac mo chomhairle
Agus mairfidh tú"
Tá fearg an domhain ar an ciséal ózóin ach tá sé ag tabhairt seans deirneach linn.
Mar sin, tá sé soléir go bhfuil fearg le mothú sa dán seo mar a phléigh mé thuas.


Just typed this out from my head so apologies if theres any mistakes!

Jijsaw

DublinArnie wrote: »

Did you translate that your self? :eek::eek::eek::eek:

Yeah xD I've been going to Irish camps since I was 7 and to the Gaeltacht since I was 10. I'm practically fluent :P

AislingE

sotisme wrote: »

Rinne mé staidéar ar an dán 'An t-Ózón atá scríofa ag Maire Aine Nic Ghearailt. Is léir go bhfuil fearg mar mhothúcháin mar tá sé ann le brath síos tríd an dáin ar fad.
Is é an ciséal ózóin atá ag caint sa dán seo. Usáideann an file pearsantú nuair a chuireann sí an dán i mbéal an ózóin.
Tá an tÓzon ag insint dúinn go bhfuil sé ann chun an domhain ar fad a chosaint ón ghriain agus rudaí dáinséarach eile
"Chun tusa a shaoradh
O iomarca gréine
Agus nithe gránna eile"
Ach tá fearg air mar ní thugann an cine daonna go leor comhairle dó. Dar leis, tá siad ag deanamh dochar don timpeallacht agus agscriosadh an t-imshaol.
Tugann sé orduithe dúinn aire a tabhairt leis an timpeallacht. Má glacann daoine leis a chomhairle, beidh gach daoine slán sábhailte
"Glac mo chomhairle
Agus mairfidh tú"
Tá fearg an domhain ar an ciséal ózóin ach tá sé ag tabhairt seans deirneach linn.
Mar sin, tá sé soléir go bhfuil fearg le mothú sa dán seo mar a phléigh mé thuas.


Just typed this out from my head so apologies if theres any mistakes!

Thanks ! Some day ill be able to write like that in Irish, some day!

DublinArnie

Jijsaw wrote: »

Yeah xD I've been going to Irish camps since I was 7 and to the Gaeltacht since I was 10. I'm practically fluent :P

OH wow! I smell jealousy . What theams would you say will come up for studied fiction in Irish?

Jijsaw

DublinArnie wrote: »

OH wow! I smell jealousy . What theams would you say will come up for studied fiction in Irish?

I don't actually learn themes, I make them up as I go along and I got 28/30 in the mocks :cool:

DublinArnie

Jijsaw wrote: »

I don't actually learn themes, I make them up as I go along and I got 28/30 in the mocks :cool:

Oh yea, I forgot, you're fluent! Did you do "An bhfaca an duine Roy Keane?" or whatever it's called XD? I could use a decent sample anwer on that .

Jijsaw

DublinArnie wrote: »

Oh yea, I forgot, you're fluent! Did you do "An bhfaca an duine Roy Keane?" or whatever it's called XD? I could use a decent sample anwer on that .

Sorry I didn't And do you mean "An bhfaca Einne Agaibh Roy Keane?"

DublinArnie

Jijsaw wrote: »

Sorry I didn't And do you mean "An bhfaca Einne Agaibh Roy Keane?"

Yes, that story! Our teacher gave us two sample answers, one of "Cursi Sport" and another on"Saol na scoil". They are not negative or postive. In the story, his granddad dies, so I want a sample answer on bron etc XD. :rolleyes: Ugh, my irish teacher is ****!

DublinArnie

Although I think Crusi sport will come up this year as Saol Na Scoil came up last year .. so yea.