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  • Registered Users Posts: 2,476 ✭✭✭ Squeeonline

    Busy at the moment, so only a couple things

    Website is WAY too wide. I have a standard 1376x768 screen and the site is far wider.
    Which wouldn't be a problem if your website was responsive/fluid.

    Bolded keywords will get you bitchslapped by google for blogspam and is annoying to read.

    Lots of text that I'm not going to read.

    I can't see the overall point of the website. There are literally thousands of sites with weight loss advice, what makes yours different. Why have you spent time making it? I have ads blocked so dont know if you are getting advertising revenue or just affiliate and product sales (though product section doesn't link yet).

  • Registered Users Posts: 16,378 ✭✭✭✭ Trojan

    What Squee said: too wide, too busy.

    Reduce width to less than 1000px. Reduce homepage elements by 50-70%.

    Make the goal of the site clear, and have a single primary call to action, and a secondary if necessary. "Don't Make Me Think".