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Need constructive critisism on my songs

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  • #2
    meathawk
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 334 ✭✭meathawk


    Chris, you're so lame.


  • #3
    grungepants
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 318 ✭✭grungepants


    meathawk wrote: »
    Chris, you're so lame.

    Ah shut up Stephen!


  • #4
    Tallon
    Closed Accounts Posts: 22,565 ✭✭✭✭Tallon


    meathawk wrote: »
    Chris, you're so lame.
    No need for that to be honest.


    I like your stuff, there's a nice light melodic vibe to them.


  • #5
    grungepants
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 318 ✭✭grungepants


    meathawk wrote: »
    Chris, you're so lame.


    you think im lame some on wrote this in "the riot tapes" thread

    Originally Posted by krd viewpost.gif
    Milan, I really like it. I've listened to it a few times and would love to hear the final piece.

    You should listen to some Stranglers and some 70s stuff.

    I have an image in my head of that girl in a band, angry, playing in some pub in 1979 or 78. I love that ropey punky bass against her voice. I have such a vivid image of it - it's a Saturday morning, in the back of some pub in Camden, and she's got Kohl rimmed eyes and they're playing their hearts out. And the bass player's got a black T-shirt on, cut-off at the shoulders to make him look muscley , and he's hitting the note really hard - and they're like a gang of outlaws.

    But

    Do we really need to hear another indie two note guitar "solo"?


    Let's make two note indie guitar solos history.


  • #6
    songswap
    Closed Accounts Posts: 11 ✭songswap


    There is a very good hook in this song. its definitely a good demo which could be tightened up with a live band arrangement. I haven't a clue what the words are!
    I reckon if you had a set of songs with similar energy and some lights you would have a right little live set that i would personally like to see.

    Best of luck and keep her lit!


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  • #7
    songswap
    Closed Accounts Posts: 11 ✭songswap


    songswap wrote: »
    There is a very good hook in this song. its definitely a good demo which could be tightened up with a live band arrangement. I haven't a clue what the words are!
    I reckon if you had a set of songs with similar energy and some lights you would have a right little live set that i would personally like to see.

    Best of luck and keep her lit!

    PS. I was referring to the song Starpop


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