this is my CV, can u tell me if something is wrong...

yahurespuestas

hi, im just want to know your point of view about my cv, and if i need to correct something or change something, well even my english is not the best maybe i could have some ortografic mistakes.. the kind of jobs that i am looking for are related with restaurants,pubs, hotels... thanks you...


Curriculum Vitae



Personal Information


Name:
:
xxx xxx xxx xxx

Date of birth:
:
xx / xx / xxxx

Nationality:
:
Mexican

Marital Status:
:
Single

E-mail:
:
xxxx_xx@hotmail.com

Phone:
:
0000000

Title:
:
Student

Address:
:
xxxxxx
Education

xxxxxx univercity , Mechatronic Engineering in my second year of studies

Work experience


I Worked as a volunteer in The Sari Soccerfest 2010 in Dublin helping in all needs to the soccer players as well as explaining to all costumers every kind of activities that we offered in the event.
I was working part time as a waiter and barman in The restaurant Villa Ferre in Saltillo, Mexico, I started to work there in November 2008 until August 2009, essential qualities for this job include being efficient and reliable and showing a professional attitude towards customers at all time. Then I Worked as an assistant chef in the Restaurant Los Pioneros in August 2009 until June 2010, Essential qualities for this job, helping the chef in all needs and making different kinds of Mexican food as well as burgers and hot dogs, duties include keeping clean all the working area.


Leisure Interests


In my free time I enjoy listening music and playing soccer. I like all kind of sports and going out with my friends, I love cooking for myself and I love childrens.


References


Available on request




Personal Information


I am friendly, hard working, and responsible I enjoy working as a part of a team. I am a quick learner who enjoys new challenges. I have computer knowledge such as (word, PowerPoint, Excel, Internet)
I am a native Spanish speaker

Berty

Your work experience should look something like this

Employer

Dates of employment

Duties:

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.
.
.
.
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Next employer repeating details above.

Make it easy to read essentially. No paragraphs, no waffle. Point format all the time. Remove the "going out with my friends". No employer wants to see this.

yahurespuestas

ok thanks you, i would try to make it more readable, anything else?

6679

I would personally remove 'Date of Birth', 'Nationality' and ' Marital Status' as the company does not need to know this for an interview and it might be a disadvantage.

questionmark?

yahurespuestas wrote: »

hi, im just want to know your point of view about my cv, and if i need to correct something or change something, well even my english is not the best maybe i could have some ortografic mistakes.. the kind of jobs that i am looking for are related with restaurants,pubs, hotels... thanks you...


Curriculum Vitae

Personal Information


Name:
:
xxx xxx xxx xxx

Date of birth:
:
xx / xx / xxxx

Nationality:
:
Mexican

Marital Status:
:
Single You dont need this

E-mail:
:
xxxx_xx@hotmail.com

Phone:
:
0000000

Title:
:
Student Dont think you need this at all

Address:
:
xxxxxx
Education

xxxxxx univercity , Mechatronic Engineering in my second year of studies Give title of univeristy, year started. If you are still completing the course maybe mention the modules you are doing if it is relevant.

Work experience


I Worked as a volunteer in The Sari Soccerfest 2010 in Dublin helping in all needs to the soccer players as well as explaining to all costumers every kind of activities that we offered in the event. Wording needs to be worked on.
I was working part time as a waiter and barman in The restaurant Villa Ferre in Saltillo, Mexico, I started to work there in November 2008 until August 2009, essential qualities for this job include being efficient and reliable and showing a professional attitude towards customers at all time. No need for this to be a continous paragraph give where you worked for how long and outline main duties.
Then I Worked as an assistant chef in the Restaurant Los Pioneros in August 2009 until June 2010, Essential qualities for this job, helping the chef in all needs and making different kinds of Mexican food as well as burgers and hot dogs, duties include keeping clean all the working area. As i said no need for a paragrah give place of work, how long you worked their maybe job title and main duties and responsibilties


Leisure Interests Hobbies and interests


In my free time I enjoy listening music and playing soccer. I like all kind of sports and going out with my friends, I love cooking for myself and I love childrens. It is presumed that you sociolize in some capactity so drop going out with friends. Drop the children thing it comes across as a bit weird.


References

Available on request No ask the people who would be giving you a refeerence can you put their details on your cv name, former boss or college lecturer and phone number. An employer will phone them if they so wish.

Personal Information

I am friendly, hard working, and responsible I enjoy working as a part of a team. I am a quick learner who enjoys new challenges. I have computer knowledge such as (word, PowerPoint, Excel, Internet)
I am a native Spanish speaker To be honest the first part could be under your main details at the top. Your knowledge of computers could be mentioned in attributes etc... I think OP you should do a bit of googling there to get a proper cv layout

Magenta

6679 wrote: »

I would personally remove 'Date of Birth', 'Nationality' and ' Marital Status' as the company does not need to know this for an interview and it might be a disadvantage.

Seconded, take out anything about your date of birth, nationality and marital status, this is none of the interviewer's business. All they should ask about in this regard is if you have a work permit.

alex73

Eres Mexicano? Tu CV es demasiado corto. Pero para trabajar en un Pub deberia andar bien.

munstergirl

Have a look on www.cvireland.ie for examples of cv's + layout.

Name, address, email top right hand corner. (Does not need to fill half page)

Career objective.
Experienced waiter blah blah. (time to sell yourself, short but sweet)

Key skills
Customer service blah blah (what is employer looking for)

Employment history
Name of employer
Dates
Duties

repeat other jobs.

Education

Other skills

Spell check!

3DataModem

Magenta wrote: »

Seconded, take out anything about your date of birth, nationality and marital status, this is none of the interviewer's business. All they should ask about in this regard is if you have a work permit.

I disagree somewhat - I suggest leaving this information in if you feel it gives you an advantage.

I have 19 years experience. Lots of companies would say "old guy" but I'm only 36 so put DOB in my CV if the company is "youthful". I also put fact that I'm married in as that indicates a level of stability (less likely to go travelling, less likely to be sick, be hangover, bang colleagues, etc). I include nationality too just in case the recruiter is biased (unfair, but possible).

yahurespuestas

thanks so much... my experience is not so big because im 19 i havent worked so much, just that..

tinnuvial

Normally I would tell people not to include their nationality. In this case since your previous work and education are in Mexico the person reading the CV will assume you are Mexican. They will then wonder if you have the legal right to work in Ireland. If they have lots of other CVs to read they might throw yours away. If you put Visa Status on your CV they won't have to wonder e.g.

Visa Status: Student with right to work part-time

If you don't have the legal right to work here then leave off your nationality and visa status. You can discuss it with the owner if you get an interview.

azzie

I'd say that you are fluent in both Spanish and English (so long as you are!).
I'd run your finished effort through a spell checker.

starlit

yahurespuestas wrote: »

hi, im just want to know your point of view about my cv, and if i need to correct something or change something, well even my english is not the best maybe i could have some ortografic mistakes.. the kind of jobs that i am looking for are related with restaurants,pubs, hotels... thanks you...


Curriculum Vitae



Personal Information


Name:
:
xxx xxx xxx xxx

Date of birth:
:
xx / xx / xxxx

Nationality:
:
Mexican

Marital Status:
:
Single

E-mail:
:
xxxx_xx@hotmail.com (change to another email address!!)

Phone:
:
0000000

Title:
:
Student

Address:
:
xxxxxx

Education

xxxxxx univercity , Mechatronic Engineering in my second year of studies

Explain in more detail! Include your final year result such as second class honours with a 2:1.

Work experience


I Worked as a volunteer in The Sari Soccerfest 2010 in Dublin helping in all needs to the soccer players as well as explaining to all costumers every kind of activities that we offered in the event.
I was working part time as a waiter and barman in The restaurant Villa Ferre in Saltillo, Mexico, I started to work there in November 2008 until August 2009, essential qualities for this job include being efficient and reliable and showing a professional attitude towards customers at all time. Then I Worked as an assistant chef in the Restaurant Los Pioneros in August 2009 until June 2010, Essential qualities for this job, helping the chef in all needs and making different kinds of Mexican food as well as burgers and hot dogs, duties include keeping clean all the working area.

Name, year, duties in bold and explain each bit of work experience underneath in more detail.

Leisure Interests


In my free time I enjoy listening music and playing soccer. I like all kind of sports and going out with my friends, I love cooking for myself and I love childrens.

Try not to include I too much!

References


Available on request




Personal Information


I am friendly, hard working, and responsible I enjoy working as a part of a team. I am a quick learner who enjoys new challenges. I have computer knowledge such as (word, PowerPoint, Excel, Internet)
I am a native Spanish speaker

Explain your skills and qualities in more detail or just list them rather than explaining in a sentence.

Magenta

snuggles285 wrote: »

Explain in more detail! Include your final year result such as second class honours with a 2:1.

He's in 2nd year, he hasn't graduated.

starlit

Magenta wrote: »

He's in 2nd year, he hasn't graduated.

Sorry misread that but could still add in result from previous year.