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sitout

Anger, seeped through every pore, trickling down and curled at the toes.
No empathy lives here, only selfishness at its core.
Alas how times have bobbed and weaved ,elation into morose.
The human hearth so fragile , form my chest you tore.
Simple sentences, far reaching consequences, blind ,you are to me.
Fixing fences, peaking over the trenches, i should have know you can not see!

holden c

Far to complicated , to be enjoyable!

busted flush

Hey man you have not posted in some while , and i can see now why. My god this was really bad , it really just seemed as if you sat down and wrote it in two minutes on a vague and often changing topic . Id stick with the day job bro if i were you, or else try and plagiarise someone else's work copy and paste it on here and claim it to be yours!

Robin_Blinds

sitout wrote: »

Anger, seeped through every pore, trickling down and curled at the toes.
No empathy lives here, only selfishness at its core.
Alas how times have bobbed and weaved ,elation into morose.
The human hearth so fragile , form my chest you tore.
Simple sentences, far reaching consequences, blind ,you are to me.
Fixing fences, peaking over the trenches, i should have know you can not see!

ive read this b4 in school english text book. good try but please dont steal other peoples work.:pac:

sitout

Robin_Blinds wrote: »

ive read this b4 in school english text book. good try but please dont steal other peoples work.:pac:

I will pay you any amount of money if you can substantiate this comment!
regards; sitout

sitout

busted flush wrote: »

Hey man you have not posted in some while , and i can see now why. My god this was really bad , it really just seemed as if you sat down and wrote it in two minutes on a vague and often changing topic . Id stick with the day job bro if i were you, or else try and plagiarise someone else's work copy and paste it on here and claim it to be yours!

Thanks for your comment, it cut, however thank you all the same, as for the art of plagiarising il leave it to the modern day pop lyricists!

Sarky

Why so petty and vindictive? This is not a primary school playground. Stop being so childish.