A Sad Story

Robin_Blinds

METH
MDMA
COCAINE

Orgasm.

she does it on the weekend
and sometimes in the morning with eggs and ham

skinny body and bones
looks like death
smoking on the hash
smoking on that meth

your brain will explode
your looks will go

stop filling yourself up with **** we,
weep for your


SANCTITY.

:mad:

busted flush

Robin_Blinds wrote: »

METH
MDMA
COCAINE

Orgasm.

she does it on the weekend
and sometimes in the morning with eggs and ham

skinny body and bones
looks like death
smoking on the hash
smoking on that meth

your brain will explode
your looks will go

stop filling yourself up with **** we,
weep for your


SANCTITY.

:mad:

very post apocalyptic, i reckon you could go far if you got into a car and drove along a straight road for 200 miles!:rolleyes:

Pollythene Pam

Amazing. Ive never read anything quite like it.
You truely are the king of kings.

Robin_Blinds

i am not the messiah just one of his prophets.

Pollythene Pam

Can I follow you? I would follow you to the ends of the Earth.

Insect Overlord

This forum is rapidly turning into a big joke.

sitout

An File wrote: »

This forum is rapidly turning into a big joke.

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Sarky

Ever thought of reporting some posts? It's a crazy new feature they installed only just... Oh. It's been there since roughly FOREVER. Mental.


You want the forum to improve? Post something good instead of one-liners lamenting the youth of today and how the good old days of [whenever] were better.

As for me, I'm done being nice. I will ban anyone who is just adding noise to the forum from now on. You all had plenty of chances to sort it out yourselves.

Robin_Blinds

was my post noise? :mad:

smithrdn

Seems somehow, you are supporting feminism

sMacktardism

I love lesbians. Unfortunately this poem isn't a lesbian.

Mario007

Robin_Blinds wrote: »

METH
MDMA
COCAINE

Orgasm.

she does it on the weekend
and sometimes in the morning with eggs and ham

skinny body and bones
looks like death
smoking on the hash
smoking on that meth

your brain will explode
your looks will go

stop filling yourself up with **** we,
weep for your


SANCTITY.

:mad:

quite enjoybable poem, but let me point a few key things to change:

1.there shouldn't be a comma after the 'we' i mean come on, are you like 17th century?

2.your poem seems to lack poetry elements, such as being a good poem

3. your poem lacks imagery, rhyme, metaphors and an overall ability to please

4. your poem seems to be very depressive, i mean for a poem that starts with 'orgasm' its pretty much a let down

5. have you ever considered to publish your poem in an irish leaving cert poetry book? all they other awful poems are published there

but well done and keep trying

(dont take much of this seriously, i hate poetry especially bad poetry)

Homicidal_jesus

This poems like a really bad chess match and seeming that all chess matches are bad this is terrible:D

busted flush

Mario007 wrote: »

quite enjoybable poem, but let me point a few key things to change:

1.there shouldn't be a comma after the 'we' i mean come on, are you like 17th century?

2.your poem seems to lack poetry elements, such as being a good poem

3. your poem lacks imagery, rhyme, metaphors and an overall ability to please

4. your poem seems to be very depressive, i mean for a poem that starts with 'orgasm' its pretty much a let down

5. have you ever considered to publish your poem in an irish leaving cert poetry book? all they other awful poems are published there

but well done and keep trying

(dont take much of this seriously, i hate poetry especially bad poetry)

mods have ye read this . If i wrote this id be sidelined for a month maybe more.

reillyj18

kinda depressing

Insect Overlord

sMacktardism, Mario007 and Homicidal_Jesus: posts reported

Busted, you won't be taken seriously by the mods unless you use the function outlined in post #8.

Mario007

An File wrote: »

sMacktardism, Mario007 and Homicidal_Jesus: posts reported

Busted, you won't be taken seriously by the mods unless you use the function outlined in post #8.

oh no...you told on us:D ah the youth of today...

Homicidal_jesus

Glad too see you take your virtual job really seriously well done!

Sarky

I distinctly remember issuing a warning about this sort of crap a few days ago.

Was it not clear enough? Will I have to make a video involving bright colours, sock puppets and really small words to make it get through to you all?

I'm looking through the last few days of threads now and if I see anything I don't like I will be very annoyed.