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Cullo Feat Terawrizt New track "Fittin In"

  • 11-12-2008 6:30pm
    #1
    Cullo
    Closed Accounts Posts: 127 ✭✭


    I Stuck a new track up Feat Terawrizt and produced by Seaz420 called "Fittin In"

    Im workin on few things at the moment, so thought id stick her up for anyone interested....

    and a happy hiphop xmas to you all,

    Cullo


Comments

  • #2
    Pen1987
    Closed Accounts Posts: 870 ✭✭✭Pen1987


    It would sound better if it didnt sound like you had a full stop after every 4 words. It sounds more you're rhyming rather than flowing. A several points you have far to many syllables in your lines.

    Terawrizt has it down though...

    I know you dont have as much experience but you rhymes are like...

    "So I dont fit in (Pause) tell me what can i do, I'm like a palestinain kid at a rally for jews"

    It should sound more like...

    "So I dont fit in, what can I do (pause) I'm like a Palestinian kid at a rally for jews..."

    ... and it should never sound like...

    "if you dont fit in (pause) to the society..."

    Youre completely splitting the sentence there, sounds rotten man...

    Tera like I said, has amore experience... his goes...

    "I dont fit in with a crowd, I'm not popular... (pause= end of statment and end of beat loop)
    I smoke a lot of pot, a hiphop philosopher" (pause = EOS+EOBL)...

    Then on the next few lines he moves away from the AB format into more complicated rhymes but his pauses never move off the EOBL.


    Overall, not really my type of track, Teras verse was nice but a bit short. You need some more practice rhyming IMO, but youre getting along. I liked your other tracks more, I hate these "I'm like..." over-and-over tunes anyway though, so i've a negetive bias.

    Stay at it.


  • #3
    Cullo
    Closed Accounts Posts: 127 ✭✭Cullo


    Cheers for the listen and the feedback man....I know what you sayin bout the pause on the 2nd verse annoys me too and im plannin on taken the whole thing again for the final on the project.....

    my fault really for stickin up half finished tracks but jus wanted to stick somethin up for the xmas and this was all i had that was new and near finished that had a decent mix on it...

    Cheers for the listen man and glad you likin me other stuff...

    Cullo


  • #4
    Scouser
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 883 ✭✭✭Scouser


    Story Cullo, got yer album off young dub and i must say, its kickin! on a permanent spin in the motor :L

    "Who am I to you?" is streets ahead of alot of the IHH stuff out there!

    keep up the good work son!


  • #5
    Makaveli
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 8,503 ✭✭✭Makaveli


    Nice work, you've got some witty lyrics in there. Keep it up, the more practice you get the better you'll sound.


  • #6
    Cullo
    Closed Accounts Posts: 127 ✭✭Cullo


    cheers for the listen lads, glad yes are likin it!

    Nice one for coppin the album scouser, loads more to come in '09...


    Cullo


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