This Story is about you...

Adrian1 · 13-08-2008 1:18am #1

Before we begin, let me say, I had this Idea to start a Story and let people who read it, add to it, thus making this book a World Hit, there will be no end, I will start it off and before long, it will be the greatest story ever told.

It was a cold winters day (Please Start).....

j0605 · 13-08-2008 7:18pm

It was a cold winters day, a thick blanket of snow covered the ground beneath her...

The Little Guy · 15-08-2008 10:14pm

j0605 wrote: »

It was a cold winters day, a thick blanket of snow covered the ground beneath her...

She mumbled to herself "where the hell did I put my shoes", as the cold bit through her toes...

Flashweaver · 16-08-2008 10:26pm

She mumbled to herself "where the hell did I put my shoes", as the cold bit through her toes and a collossal blizzard raged around her. Her only companion, a pale grey wolf, howled with the harsh wind hurrying through the valley. Soon it would abandon her, just as her guardian had done a week before. And she would die alone in this god-forsaken valley. Still, something, some sort of mysterious force drew her onward. And she knew, if she got to him alive, the Occurian could be stopped and the collossus quelled.

The Raven. · 21-08-2008 7:04pm

As she dragged her icy feet forward, she noticed a strange, dark figure standing in the distance. In desperation she uttered a faint cry for help, which was all she could manage in her pitiful half-frozen state. But there was no reply. She tried again, but her voice faded into silence as she fell motionless on to the white snow, powerless except for her vision. As the figure began to move in her direction, she could see that it was surrounded by an eerie sort of magical mist, which seemed to emanate from within its form. It had no face, except a pair of burning yellow eyes adrift in pools of black nothingness.

mud · 26-09-2008 1:03am

"Dad? Is that you"? She called, squinting nervously through the magical mist which was already starting to warm her up and dry her clothes. "Yes spawn, it's me, I've been looking for you since last Sunday, I'm surpised to find you here hanging out with that mangy cur", this last was spat in contempt at the rangy wolf who skulked in his daughter's shadow "I thought you'd know better than to stray into this valley of eternal snow, obviously your mother isn't spending much of my vaginamony on your education" Off to the side a red glow which had been slowly getting bigger and brighter finally managed to get their attention, "oh $hit" said Dad, we've got company . . .

Adrian1 · 04-12-2008 5:11pm

"oh $hit" said Dad, we've got company...................

mr perfect · 23-12-2008 2:47pm

mud wrote: »

"Dad? Is that you"? She called, squinting nervously through the magical mist which was already starting to warm her up and dry her clothes. "Yes spawn, it's me, I've been looking for you since last Sunday, I'm surpised to find you here hanging out with that mangy cur", this last was spat in contempt at the rangy wolf who skulked in his daughter's shadow "I thought you'd know better than to stray into this valley of eternal snow, obviously your mother isn't spending much of my vaginamony on your education" Off to the side a red glow which had been slowly getting bigger and brighter finally managed to get their attention, "oh $hit" said Dad, we've got company . . .

quick hide.. who is it dad, she replied, im not sure he said, as i was serching for you i could of sworn i was been followed..who do you think it is dad..shh here they are said dad as he reached for his side arm...

beleza · 23-12-2008 3:35pm

.... too late as it turned out for just as he tightened his grip on the heavy metal rod he was struck down! The darkness was not merciful. The large creature bore over Janet with an angry fervour. She looked accross at her dying father, His body slumped and languished on the frozen earth. His life trickling away and she could do nothing. She had submitted to fear and self preservation and she didn't dare move an inch. All the while her eyes transfixed on her father's limp body. She could now see that he had been almost decapitated by the ogre's blow.

Canus91 · 03-01-2009 2:13pm

Then suddenly there was an explosion of white light which in seconds had totaly consumed the ogre. When the light subsided instead of an ogre there was man."When you awake head north i will be waiting...you are the key to the salvation of a people" said the man camly and with that done he dissappeared.She then fell into a dreamless sleep.

atc · 16-01-2009 10:15pm

.... a sleep of which she dreamt of what must be done... she must rouse herself from this slumber and go forward... many people had come to her in her dreams, people from her past, her father resplendent in his customary outfit, her future, Cal waiting... waiting for her to meet with him, but its so hard to move, i must wake myself, i can hear the wind blowing, i can feel the leaves falling, i must wake, Cal awaits me...CAL i must come to you, the body moves, the arms rise slowly the head rises, where am i, who is cal?????