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Satire

  • 24-07-2008 7:39pm
    #1
    elmyra
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,755 ✭✭✭


    I'm trying my hand at satirical writing on my blog at the moment, would it be okay to link to the post to get some feedback on whether it's actually funny or would that be decidedly naff?

    I thought I'd ask before self-promoting.


Comments

  • #2
    Thomas_S_Hunterson
    Closed Accounts Posts: 6,151 ✭✭✭Thomas_S_Hunterson


    Sure, but things could get a bit ruthless if it is 'decidedly naff':)


  • #3
    Hagar
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16,793 ✭✭✭✭Hagar


    Well if Sean_K says it's ok...


  • #4
    elmyra
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,755 ✭✭✭elmyra


    Thanks for giving the go-ahead.

    Elmyra Tries Satire

    You might as well say if it's 'decidedly naff', I'll never learn younger...


  • #5
    Dimitri
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 641 ✭✭✭Dimitri


    I liked it, it made me chuckle a bit!


  • #6
    am i bovvered
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,102 ✭✭✭am i bovvered


    I think it is good:)


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  • #7
    Thomas_S_Hunterson
    Closed Accounts Posts: 6,151 ✭✭✭Thomas_S_Hunterson


    Hagar wrote: »
    Well if Sean_K says it's ok...

    ED00312_.gif


  • #8
    Hagar
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16,793 ✭✭✭✭Hagar


    Apples are nice but any chance of a Bacardi & Coke? :D


  • #9
    elmyra
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,755 ✭✭✭elmyra


    thank you so far! Someone who read it earlier today thought it was serious, so I was wondering if I'd gone wrong..


  • #10
    Rabies
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 15,258 ✭✭✭✭Rabies


    elmyra wrote: »
    thank you so far! Someone who read it earlier today thought it was serious, so I was wondering if I'd gone wrong..

    Check out the Creative Writing forum
    http://www.boards.ie/vbulletin/forumdisplay.php?f=382

    The guys over there might have a few pointers for you.


  • #11
    Jesus Wept
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 25,243 ✭✭✭✭Jesus Wept


    Good stuff! :)


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  • #12
    elmyra
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,755 ✭✭✭elmyra


    Rabies wrote: »
    Check out the Creative Writing forum
    http://www.boards.ie/vbulletin/forumdisplay.php?f=382

    The guys over there might have a few pointers for you.

    Cheers for the tip!


  • #13
    fitz0
    Closed Accounts Posts: 1,753 ✭✭✭fitz0


    Brought a smile to my face :D Keep it up


  • #14
    gerTheGreat
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 871 ✭✭✭gerTheGreat


    Overall, I think that it's very good. Can I make one critical observation? (Sorry) I find it funnier when jokes are left hanging, but you explained one or two of yours, e.g

    “people would only buy out of brand loyalty – and even then they’d be tempted to switch – kind of like Clinton’s support base actually”.

    Drop the bold part and it's funnier, (more subtle.)

    Anyway, that's a minor gripe and I hope that you take it as constructive criticism, because that's the way that it's meant.

    cheers,
    ger


  • #15
    elmyra
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,755 ✭✭✭elmyra


    Actually that's a really handy bit of feedback - thank you. I wonder at what point to leave it to the people's brains. I think I shall have to start trusting that getting jokes isn't rocket science! Seriously, cheers :)


  • #16
    Fey!
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 4,183 ✭✭✭Fey!


    I thought that it was very good, and that GerTheGreats feedback is, IMO, spot on the money.

    Keep up the good work.


  • #17
    elmyra
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,755 ✭✭✭elmyra


    Thanks! Working on the subtlety!


  • #18
    gerTheGreat
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 871 ✭✭✭gerTheGreat


    Glad that I could help. I wasn't sure if you'd take it badly. Best of luck with the writing.

    Ger.


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