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  • #2
    sheesh
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 4,081 ✭✭✭sheesh


    love the first the light on his face is great.


  • #3
    Galadriel
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,292 ✭✭✭Galadriel


    Yeah, the first one is pretty cool, also like the last one as it is.


  • #4
    RCNPhotos
    Closed Accounts Posts: 601 ✭✭✭RCNPhotos


    1st: Don't like the composition. Guitar is totally cut out almost.

    2nd: Colours need work, too desaturated looking. Compositionally think it would be better portrait without the light in it. Nice expression though.

    3rd: Again composition. Clone out the curtain (?) on the right and the guitar.


  • #5
    dr strangelove
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 816 ✭✭✭dr strangelove


    Don't like the composition. Guitar is totally cut out almost.

    Would you normally try to keep the whole instrument in? Seeing as how he's up there playing the thing? of is it that it's just a bit distracting only seeing a bit of it?

    Colours need work, too desaturated looking. Compositionally think it would be better portrait without the light in it.

    Yeah, i wondered about the spot-light too, i cropped out some distracting hands, heads and mobile phones in the foreground, but wanted to keep something in the background. As for the colours, i was just using the available light, if anything i'd go down to b&w.


    Thanks for the input - i'll start mucking about with them and see what i come up with.


  • #6
    Fenster
    Closed Accounts Posts: 4,763 ✭✭✭Fenster


    The all seem a little too dark and too tightly cropped to me, so there's no sense of what is actually going on up on the stage.


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  • #7
    TelePaul
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 4,093 ✭✭✭TelePaul


    RCNPhotos wrote: »
    1st: Don't like the composition. Guitar is totally cut out almost.

    2nd: Colours need work, too desaturated looking. Compositionally think it would be better portrait without the light in it. Nice expression though.

    3rd: Again composition. Clone out the curtain (?) on the right and the guitar.

    Oh la di da Mr. Hotshot! Why don't you show us some of YOUR work, eh???

    (Sarcasm! SARCASM!)


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