Urban Underground C & C

shepthedog

Evening all

Interested to see what people make of this shot.. Again was taken in a recent trip to Budapest, taken under the Chain Bridge..



Have been trying to work on my urban/street shots so feedback is welcome.
Thanks

Masada

looks cool., i think it would be better without the person in it and maybe in colour so as to bring out the shadowy bits and emphasis the graffiti.,

Rojo

I think the person works well in it. :-)

Dades

I'm not sure I like the way the top of the girls head merges with the ceiling lights. I would have preferred her more framed in the exit.

But it is interesting shot though!

Muineach

i hope you don't mind but i gave it a bit of ps to show you what i mean.
i like the darkness at the end of the tunnel so I blacked that out, and cloned out the last light, you get the idea when you see the photo.
Kinda like having the girl walking down into darkness, that was my thought on seeing the photo, that and "lovely girl"

shepthedog

hey thanks for the comments guys.. It was in my mind when taking that i wanted her walking as if into the darkness from brightness of tunnel... I have a few other shots of her in various places of tunnel and also the tunnel empty.. Time to get playing in PS.

pete4130

I'd like to see it alot darker and more sinister with the contrast pumped up. I think the girl standing there looks a little more contrived than if she was in the motion of walking away with some slight motion blur. Good shot all the same though.