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Strange Daze

  • 20-04-2007 11:48pm
    #1
    Insect Overlord
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    A single night of peaceful sleep
    Could cure me of what ails my mind.
    But as it is, it hurts to think
    And there's too many answers I cannot find.
    I think in hurricanes and destruction.
    The sudden moments of respite
    Worry as much as the commotion,
    Whether I lie in darkness or walk in daylight.


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  • #2
    Black Swan
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    Grand. Now just think how provocative it could be if you revised it slightly to a reflection upon HER?


  • #3
    Insect Overlord
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    Blue_Lagoon wrote:
    Grand. Now just think how provocative it could be if you revised it slightly to a reflection upon HER?

    That's a very interesting idea :) . The thing is, I try to make my poems as true to life as possible. They're usually based mostly on my own thoughts or biographical observation, which leaves little room for fiction. I appreciate your suggestion, I can see how it could be quite effective from that perspective. Unfortunately it just wouldn't feel as real to me.


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