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The World is Crazy

SolMate · 2007-03-26 20:44:05

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=31052&songID=1552382 To listen, choose Hi-Fi link unless on dial-up. This is a collab with Rick Norton, a Florida based songwriter. I did the music and vox to his lyric. Would appreciate any thoughts you have to improve it. Thanks Gerry

26-03-2007 8:44pm

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SolMate

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=31052&songID=1552382

To listen, choose Hi-Fi link unless on dial-up.

This is a collab with Rick Norton, a Florida based songwriter. I did the music and vox to his lyric. Would appreciate any thoughts you have to improve it.

Thanks

Gerry

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#2 28-03-2007 11:00pm

Paligulus

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really liked this one!!!

Loved the chord progression on the chorus!!! It sounds like everything is done with VSTi's? If you had some real instruments on it that song would be excellant. A nice tight bass and comped guitar rhythm part would really complete it. A bit of harmony vox on the chorus would do no harm either.

In terms of structure I might throw in a middle 8 that would be in the same vein as the chorus i.e slightly spacey...

But well done again. That's a really good song...

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