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Insomnia / If Tomorrow Comes

  • 08-03-2007 10:00pm
    #1
    Peyton Manning
    Closed Accounts Posts: 16,658 ✭✭✭✭


    Insomnia

    I dont know whether Im dead or alive,
    The walls they melt around me.
    A fire breathes deep and burns my eyes,
    The raven's brigade surrounds me.

    I try to stand but stumble over,
    Forever falling into the abyss.
    And now I wait in lifeless odour,
    Forever longing for her kiss.

    If Tomorrow Comes

    If tomorrow comes at sunrise,
    Will I see the light once more?
    Will this savage weight be lifted,
    Should I walk out the door?

    Will birds still sing at dawn?
    For Ive lost all sense of time you see.
    Will all my problems go to sleep,
    Contradicting my own futility?

    Will my eyes remain alive somehow,
    To cease the fires that burn the wall,
    Will everything return to normal,
    If tomorrow comes at all?

    Any feedback / constructive criticism appreciated :o


Comments

  • #2
    lilmissprincess
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 3,016 ✭✭✭lilmissprincess


    I like these, the imagery is great and they actually rhyme....


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