Advertisement
If you have a new account but are having problems posting or verifying your account, please email us on hello@boards.ie for help. Thanks :)
Hello all! Please ensure that you are posting a new thread or question in the appropriate forum. The Feedback forum is overwhelmed with questions that are having to be moved elsewhere. If you need help to verify your account contact hello@boards.ie
Hi there,
There is an issue with role permissions that is being worked on at the moment.
If you are having trouble with access or permissions on regional forums please post here to get access: https://www.boards.ie/discussion/2058365403/you-do-not-have-permission-for-that#latest

Maria (a poem)

  • 23-01-2007 5:25pm
    #1
    Insect Overlord
    Moderators, Social & Fun Moderators, Society & Culture Moderators Posts: 30,972 Mod ✭✭✭✭


    I wrote this one about 18 months ago about a girl I knew at the time. Just looking for a bit of feedback on it, so don't be afraid to comment!

    Maria

    Comparisons of beauty are easy
    not when a summer’s day and Tralee’s rose
    are lacking in originality.
    The feeling for her that I have still grows,
    perhaps because we are so held apart.
    This is to me a predicament new,
    one which late at night doth pain my heart.
    Around me people jest it is love true.
    Rarely ‘fore one’s eyes does such beauty pass.
    Rarer still it’s felt reciprocated.
    A friendship that I wish will ever last,
    a feeling hoped will ne’er be out-dated.
    As this I write ‘the woman of my dreams’
    Shall remain just out of my reach, it seems…


Comments

Advertisement