My First Movie!

~Rebel~ · 21-12-2006 1:30am #1

Hey folks, just uploaded my first ever movie onto YouTube, was just done as a 5% project of a 10credit module in college, but i figured i may as well have a bit of fun and throw in way more effort then was worth.

Its about the rise of the pen, taking over from pencils - with extreme force!

Have a look anyway and lemme know what you think (be gentle!)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RF0eq5ij87c

fade2black · 21-12-2006 1:34am

Is there another part to it?

21-12-2006 1:34am

I liked the bit where

Fin was rubbed out and written in pen

the most.

~Rebel~ · 21-12-2006 1:39am

fade2black wrote:

Is there another part to it?

nope, thats it. by the way the

snap you hear when the screen goes black is meant to be the pencil snapping, was the best soundfile i could get but a lot of people ive shown it to didnt get that, must look for a better one

fade2black · 21-12-2006 1:42am

It ended abruptly for me the first time but I think it was just a you tube problem. Twas good fun. Well done.

~Rebel~ · 21-12-2006 1:52am

Cheers

Ya i found it wont go past the first name on credits for me, which will probably piss off my buddy who moved the pencils! mite do a quick reedit on it to raise the volume of some of the stuff in the background (stairs, guy whimpering as walking down hall) and put it back up anyway.

Ruu_Old · 21-12-2006 1:55am

Bring on the next one.

I enjoyed it anyway.

~Rebel~ · 21-12-2006 2:30am

Thanks

While at it figured i might as well upload my audio project. Was just given a 1min 20secs of footage and had to add whatever audio I wanted. Mines a presentation of a proposed attack on Charles bridge in Prague.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mJAUxhr5bNM

TerrorFirmer · 21-12-2006 1:03pm

Ha. Very well done.

emeraldstar · 25-12-2006 1:21am

where are you studying multimedia??

~Rebel~ · 25-12-2006 1:36am

Its a 1 year, taught Masters in Multimedia, in UCC in Cork.

feel free to PM me anyway if you need any info.

Average-Ro · 25-12-2006 6:17pm

Hey Rebel, I'm doing film & televison myself in College, and what I always look for is constructive criticism, so I hope you don't mind me saying that some of the shots seemed to be a bit soft (focus wise), though that might have been the quality of you tube.

Also, the pacing through-out seemed kinda off, but other than that, I liked the idea!

The following link is to the first practice movie I directed in College (seeing as that is what the link is about) Constructive criticism always welcome!!

http://www.bebo.com/FlashBox.jsp?FlashViewType=Personal&FlashBoxId=2634486212&MemberId=114254456

My First Movie!

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