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The O Brien Gathering (c)

  • 18-11-2006 12:40pm
    #1
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 194 ✭✭


    THE O BRIEN GATHERING (C)


    set in a village or country pub somewhere in ireland,


    you have john o brien the bar owner, the man behind the o brien gathering, kind of a faltwy towers guy, on tippy toes hopeing event will go off well,

    a couple of regulars in and out of the pub, are jennie and jane two hot local chicks,

    then you got jimmy and jim usually bantering @ the bar

    the local head of the garda, would be james an easy going guy with off the wall ideas for policeing


    then you have johns wife,joan, who is all so on her tippy toes with excitement about the o brien gathering,

    scene one

    early one morning in johonnys pub


    joan

    hey john there ia an aussie guy on the phone enquireing about the gathering, will you talk to him?

    john

    ok give me the phone hi hows the going?

    aussie johonny


    good day mate how are you? let me intruduce my self, my name is johonny o brien, maybe you have heard of me, seen me in a movie, do ye have aussie soaps over there,

    barman john

    yea we have a lot of different soaps here,we have lifeboy i think ? ill ask the wife, myself i rarely use soap, a splash of water on the face will do me anyday,

    oh but dont get me wrong i do wash my feet and the rest of myself with soap every now and then, cant be smelly in my line of work,

    aussie johonny

    good lord hold on there mate, you are after taken me up wrong, im talking about televison soaps,


    bar man johonny


    oh oh ohhhhhhhhhhhhh sorry, i will put you back to the wife


    aussie johonny

    ok mate talk to you later


    julie (johonny and joans daughter)

    comes running out of bathroom all excited,

    he da ma says you were talking to a johonny o brien from down under,

    barman john

    from where?

    julie

    oh dad from australia, who is he? what do he do?


    barman john

    he said good day mate, my name is johonny o brien, maybe you have seen me in the movies, then he wanted to know had we australian soap here,

    julie


    oh dad, dad you you are so slowwwwwwwwwwwwww,

    do you know know who you were talking to??????????????????????


    barman johonny

    no julie who?


    julie

    dad you were talking to d johonny o brien, he is every girls dream man, he must be one of the hottest guys on the planet,

    barman johonny

    well he would be comeing from australia, dont know how they stand the heat there, so hot


    julie

    oh dad i dont mean that kind of hot, where is my mobile i must text the girls and tell them who was on the phone to us


Comments

  • Posts: 0 [Deleted User]


    why are you all of your scripts based in or around a pub?


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 194 ✭✭djeddy


    it is a good place to meet a variety of people i think, my other story the band that never were was set in a community hall, another set in a school


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 5,016 ✭✭✭Blush_01


    Once again hon, this needs a lot of tweaking. Even simple things like spelling Johnny's name correctly would make a difference to how the play reads. Also, how long is this play? Less than 30 seconds? I'm actually interested. See, pages of a play may only take up minutes on a stage or on the radio.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 194 ✭✭djeddy


    hi , i was hopeing to make a feature length film out of this story, kind of killnskully,

    sorry about the spellings,


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 194 ✭✭djeddy


    scene 2

    john joan and and julie haveing breakfast, somewhere on down the line, guitar rock song playing on the radio,

    john

    i dont beleive it,


    joan

    beleive what john

    john

    @ long last im hearing a good song on the radio, there is a god after all

    i love that guitar sound, just like the old days

    julie

    you mean just like your young days dad, and would you beleive


    i also like that song, so now for you, i do have good taste in

    music as well

    joan

    a mighty change from that bang bang stuff you and your sister call music too,


    john

    will you tell us julie who is this johnny o brien?


    julie

    dad he is a very big star in australia, movies televison music, he has a cd out @ the moment, just fab

    john

    so he would be able to draw the crowds


    julie

    he would pack the place dad

    joan

    your dad is after getting another brain wave julie


    john

    do you know what?

    julie

    what?


    john

    johnny o brien is a god send


    julie

    i allways knew that dad


    joan

    come on john what have you up your sleeve?

    john


    something very close to my heart

    julie

    tell us dad pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


    john

    ok, do you remember


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