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On my way (Fashion) C&C

  • 12-11-2006 03:06AM
    #1
    Closed Accounts Posts: 402 ✭✭


    One from the weekend.


    there.jpg


Comments

  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 10,265 ✭✭✭✭Borderfox


    It definitely has your look, I just cant warm to it. It seems a bit harsh to my eye.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 16,624 ✭✭✭✭Fajitas!


    Is it just me, or is the image a bit flat/grey?

    It's a good shot, and well composed, but the flatness kinda strikes me... :)


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 10,265 ✭✭✭✭Borderfox


    Yeah thats what it is....easily fixed...


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,155 ✭✭✭SOL


    That or it isn't quite flat enough, I cant decide


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 710 ✭✭✭Dundhoone


    The models eyes arent engaging the viewer, they lead me off wondering whats up there. The clothes are dull, grey boots??
    It needs a shot of colour someplace.

    The pose is a bit "im a little teapot" . But it is different and different is good.

    Sorry if this is very negitive, its way better than anything fashiony that i'd manage!


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  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,775 ✭✭✭Sebzy


    Hmmm leaves me a bit cold sorry.

    Lighting it a bit too little too high.
    This was a one softbox to the right about 7ft high? just looks off when shot with that pose.
    What about cropping just the top half and getting some light into those shadows.

    Updated ----
    - Messed around for a minute with photoshop and added some yellow and brought up the shadow in curves and there is such a diffrence.

    Seb.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 4,763 ✭✭✭Fenster


    It seems technically okay, but as everyone else said it feels very lifeless.


  • Closed Accounts Posts: 402 ✭✭AlisonB


    Thanks all, i have alot from this series so your comments are a big help. I'll have a thinker around with the shots and see how i can improve.


  • Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 633 ✭✭✭Tarakiwa


    Feel like I am out on a bit of a limb here ......... BUT .....

    I like it.

    I really like the shot from the waist up - not too mad about the rest but overall I like it!


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