How would you translate this?

montezuma

How would you translate this? It's part of my résumé for use in Montréal. I have my own version of it translated but it seems too literal or something and I'd prefer it to be perfect!

Responsibilities:
Taking in orders/deliveries,
Working on cashier,
Restocking shelves,
Making deliveries to customers.

Merci beaucoup!

dédé

I'd say:

Responsabilités:
Prendre les commandes,
Tenir la caisse,
Remplir les rayons/plateaux (depends on the context)
Servir les clients.

Steffano2002

I'd agree with Dédé but it really depends on the context...

Shinto

Aucune idee. Mais bon chance a Montréal. Magnifique ville....je voudrais y aller quelque jour.

montezuma

Thanks for your replies. The context is a large off-licence by the way. I'm glad i asked now cos it seems my own attempt was way off! Not sure if "Servir les clients " is exactly what i meant. How about "Livrer aux clients"? I don't know, this CV-translating business is trickier than i first anticipated!

dédé

You can't say "livrer aux clients" in that context. It would mean that you're going to their house! But I reckon you'd be a waitress/waiter so it's definetly "servir". And you have to say "remplir les plateaux" in that context, not "rayons".

lili

je dirais :
approvisionner les rayons.
livrer les clients.

montezuma

You can't say "livrer aux clients" in that context. It would mean that you're going to their house! But I reckon you'd be a waitress/waiter so it's definetly "servir". And you have to say "remplir les plateaux" in that context, not "rayons".

Sorry, I mustn't have made myself clear at all!
I wasn't a waiter at all - I was a shop assistant-type person. And I did mean to make deliveries to their houses!

What is the diference between plateaux and rayons? I meant shop shelves by the way.

Et lili, j'avais déjà écrit "approvisionner", mais je l'ai changé à "remplir" quand dédé a répondu! Maintenant je ne suis pas sur!

Thanks for your help everyone!

dédé

So if you did mean going to their houses, you'll have to use "livrer les clients".
And if it's shop shelves, you have to use rayons. You can use both approvisionner or remplir.

The difference between rayons and plateaux? There's a huge one. A plateau is the thing on wich waiters bring glasses and stuff. And a rayon is where the items are displayed in a shop.

To sum it up, that would make:

Prendre les commandes,
Tenir la caisse,
Remplir/approvisionner les rayons,
Livrer les clients.

Good luck with that.

lili

disons que le terme "remplir" semble plus adapté s'il s'agit de rayons.
s'il s'agit de stocks tu pourras utiliser "approvisionner".