DONT open if your squemish- this made me sick

ice_woman

This poem is doing the rounds on the net to show people the terrible reality of rape all over the world.
I dont want any messages saying" why did you post that" because i warned you in the title not to read this if your squemish. This WILL upset and offend you...

And I shouldnt be barred for putting this up- That bloke setting off spyware in all his posts has not been banned so why should I for trying to let more people see this

A true rape story. read this. its disgusting.

Please, just listen. Im just a girl
Trying to shout out for help; or a hand
Please take a read; just listen
Look from my view; Try and understand?

I love my Dad; O Dear God i do
But some things i need to ask why
Because isnt my love in my heart
Good enough; He likes to see me hurt and cry?

It happens every week;
Since i turned eight years old
Please understand im thirteen and weak
This is an act; bravery and bold

I want to tell you; so much
So maybe one of you can help me?
I can't do this on my own; alone
So please im begging on my knees

Friday night; Pub night for Dad
So he forgets all about my Mom
Drinks till he can hardly stand
Sometimes a quick drink for fun?

Mom left me when i was seven and a half
But its all in the past; o i miss her though
I look at my father; crying he is
But when is it time; for his pain to show

Friday after a drink; he can stand and walk
Hes not out his face; tripping to fall
"Jess get down these staires"
At 12 Midnight; Its not like him to call

Walking in my nighty; rubbing my eyes
My fathers sitting on the sofa with his friend
He pats the seat in the middle; i sit
Shivering so cold; a quilt he lends

"Jessy you love me dont you" a smile; his
Their breathe spirts weep
"Daddy you know i do; what is it?"
He smiles at his friend; his hand creeps

His friend takes my hand; looks me in the eyes
Daddys creeping up my nightie; cold hands
I try to pull his hand away; grip is strong!
They look at one another; nod; something planned

I feel my palms sweat; Daddys under my knickers
"Daddy im going to bed! Night" Pulling again
But there grip is to strong for weak me
I look at both; and ask, who are these men?

His fingers going up me; pulling away
His friend leans forward; a kiss? Why?
His toungue moving mine; my eyes squint
Lean back and away; "Why are you doing this?"

No answer, i feel the pain inside me; him
Chucks the quilt on the floor; me to
I try and scamper away, but im not fast
"O Daddy please, i love you"

His friend; pulling at my nightie
And my Dad pulling my pants down
His friend pinning my hands to the floor
As my Dad lies himself on the ground

I squirm; as Daddy friend pulls me up
And places me ontop of Daddy; thrusts within
I cry; i bite; i scratch; i slap; i fail
"O Daddy please you win you win!"

I can feel my skin rip; my virginity breaking free
I can feel the blood seep down my leg
"Daddy your hurting me please"
I plead to him and his friend; not even a beg

Daddys laughing; why does he laugh?
His friend shoves himself in my mouth and moans
Tieing my hands togather; moving in and out
"Ride me Jessy" He laughs and groans

They smile at one another; laugh to
They roll me over and spread me wide wel
My daddy sits on my face; himself in again
While his friend talks and pushes himself inside

I can hardly breathe; i gag for air
I cough and splutter; cry and weep
I beg and plead; but its no use
Theyve already made me hurt and bleed

I stare into his eyes; that look upon me
This is not my Dad; where is he?
If he was still here; would he care
Would he actually even; see?

Finally they get of and lie me on the sofa
My cheeks blouchy from tears and pain
They play with them selfs; all over me
Rub it in; making me feel the shame

"Why Daddy? Please tell me why?"
Dad looks at his friend; and waves him away
"Jessy i love you" he smiles and kisses my cheek
"Is that all you have in your heart to say?"

He puts my nightie on me
I walks me to my bedroom door
Ever since that night; His friend
And himself every Friday come back for more

"Night sweet Girl; You are my life"
Closing the door, tears still down my face
Still the smell of him and his friend
Fade into me like disgrace


I watch the Moon go down; the sun come up
"Jessy its school" Knocking at my door
I cant help but cry; weep in pain
Because im so scared he wanted more

But one night daddy took it too far
Daddy and his friend came back for one last shot
They were worried they would get caught
So he and his friend took me to a cemetary lot

I was blindfolded and my hands were tied back
"Daddy please!! Not tonight!"
Daddy and his friend both had their last fun
After that i tried to put up a fight

I begged daddy "Please no more!"
All he could say "Shut up you stupid whore!"
Daddy unblindfolded me at last
He said I love you so much

He went back into the car and pulled out a bat
"Daddy I swear I wont say a thing!!!!"
I was dead
After only one swing..........................




i feel for you if this dosent touch you because this is just wrong.

Hagar

JMJ and the Holy Donkey, where are you getting this stuff?
Only 24 posts and I'm nearly afraid to read any thread you've posted on.:o

Mexicola

Why did you post this? Seriously? :mad:
There is no need to post sick stuff like this on boards...

ice_woman wrote:

I dont want any messages saying "why did you post that" because i warned you in the title not to read this if your squemish. This WILL upset and offend you...

Are you trying to upset and offend people or something? Do you not think that we realise the "terrible reality of rape all over the world?" :eek: Of course some will argue that they wont be offended by it... but I'd be worried about them...

The very title of this thread is an invitation... of course people are going to read it coz they think 'ah sure it might not be what I think'...

There is enough of this crap in the papers at the moment without someone else rubbing it in our faces. Cheers!

monkeyfudge

That poor girl.

She has to go to school on a Saturday.

RotalicaV

monkeyfudge wrote:

That poor girl.

She has to go to school on a Saturday.

Hahaha, now THAT'S brilliant.

super_furry

Who say's it's true?

Miss Fluff

Why exactly did you post that?

Canis Lupus

Where's the part that says forward this to 40 gazillion billion friends or your knob will fall off regardless of whether you're a man or woman?

xzanti

If I was a betting woman Id say she got it in some chain email and was told to forward it or her family would die or some sh*t :rolleyes:

Pretty sick tbh

magpie

Finally they get of and lie me on the sofa
My cheeks blouchy from tears and pain
They play with them selfs; all over me
Rub it in; making me feel the shame

The most offensive thing about this poem is the grammar and spelling.

monkeyfudge

magpie wrote:

The most offensive thing about this poem is the grammar and spelling.

Yes. A dead 8 year old would probably do a better job actually.

delly

I was dead
After only one swing..........................

OMG, it must be a ghost writer :eek:

danniemcq

ice_woman wrote:

I was dead
After only one swing.................

shoulda went on the slide, sorry got way to bored and missed most of that whole story and giggled when i seen that

toiletduck

delly wrote:

OMG, it must be a ghost writer :eek:

ice_woman

ice_woman wrote:

i feel for you if this dosent touch you because this is just wrong.

Give me back two minutes of my life.

DublinWriter

ice_woman wrote:

This poem is doing the rounds on the net to show people the terrible reality of rape all over the world...i feel for you if this dosent touch you because this is just wrong.

It upsets me because it's one of the most maulkish examples of teenage angst poetry I've ever read. Obviously from the last couple of lines, the author is writing from his/her fevered imagination and not experience.

If you want to read proper poetry about parential abuse, then go read 'Daddy' by Slyvia Plaith or Philip Larkin's "This Be The Verse".

Winters

Please forward this email only 7 billion of your friends in the next 3 nano seconds or the same will happen to you...

Furry Burger

come on lads... rape is not funny.....unless your being raped by a clown

danniemcq

danniemcq wrote:

shoulda went on the slide, sorry got way to bored and missed most of that whole story and giggled when i seen that

Aha ha ha ha ha fantastic

John: It's camp! The ludicrously tragic? The tragically ludicrous?
Homer: Oh yeah. Like when a clown dies.

Furry Burger reminded me of that.

WhiteWashMan

not really the sort of material that AH was created for.
If you you feel you need to discuss rape, then i would suggest either humanities or personal issues, and you are more likely to get some more mature responses.
im not happy to see such blasé attitudes towads rape, but its not my place to tell people how to think or what to opine. thread closed.