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Supraeyes

18AD · 2006-01-07 20:47:02

Supraeyes Beyond vision, The division cannot be made. Life and death, seemless, Sleeping dreamless, But never gone. In the kingdom of nature, Fate is unknown to those Who roam alone, Running free, always home. Ill lumen hated, Hell this beauty, Ash, a doe stumbles, Fall, inkling to death, Or to life... Alternate reading:…

07-01-2006 8:47pm

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Supraeyes

Beyond vision,
The division cannot be made.
Life and death, seemless,
Sleeping dreamless,
But never gone.

In the kingdom of nature,
Fate is unknown to those
Who roam alone,
Running free, always home.

Ill lumen hated,
Hell this beauty,
Ash, a doe stumbles,
Fall, inkling to death,
Or to life...

Alternate reading:
(Surprise
...........
...........
Illuminated,
Health is beauty,
A shadow stumbles,
Falling, cling to death,
Or to life...

Mix and match as you see fit.)

First poem ever, please be gentle.

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#2 07-01-2006 9:02pm

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have to say i like it for your first poem ever, i like the play on words you have made, well done!

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