~unbroken~

ven0m

these are the lyrics to a new song I've recently written called 'Unbroken'. Any feedback or comments are appreciated:



VERSE:

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The way you laugh,
makes me want to hold you all night,
as I hold your photograph,
let me hold your pain,
I walk through the door,
just to see you smile,
cos it's you that I adore,
you don't see that I'm wide open,
this pain inside makes me wish,
that you'll leave me unbroken.



VERSE:

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Make me over & take me over now,
let there be three x's cast in stone,
make me breath again & tell me how,
steal my soul & bleed me to the bone,
so much left unsaid as I fall,
never wanted to feel like this,
why did no one warn me before,
why werent the words just spoken,
that you'll leave me unbroken

No tears, no goodbyes,
no cries as I sail into the night,
why do the stars tell me a story,
with an ending left to write?




CHORUS:

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Why don't I feel right,
when you're not around,
Why does leaving you make me cry,
why do I feel lost & unfound,
so much was said, so much felt true,
why did I become unstuck,
Why was I left unglued?



BRIDGE:

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Leave me unbroken,
cos this life of mine it tears me open,
I feel my life as it comes from above,
why do I feel so weak & so strong in love,
confusion has set in,
how do I feel when I'm not with you,
what I feel i know would hurt you,
why does it feel like I can't win,
why does I feel like an outcast within


CHORUS:

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Why don't I feel right,
when you're not around,
Why does leaving you make me cry,
why do I feel lost & unfound,
so much was said, so much felt true,
why did I become unstuck,
Why was I left unglued?

Why don't I feel right,
when you're not around,
Why does leaving you make me cry,
why do I feel lost & unfound,
so much was said, so much felt true,
why did I become unstuck,
Why was I left unglued?


::: ven0mous :::

shiv

I like the lost and unfound and outcast within phrases best

sci0x

What kinda song is this gona be? Rock, pop ... ?

ven0m

I've two musical projects on the go @ the moment, one being a 'hard-rock' orientated one & another being a more 'acoustic based one', & to be frank - depending on what way I wanna play the track, it could be used in either one.....


::: ven0mous :::