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No words

  • 27-07-2004 1:39am
    #1
    Battlesnake
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 96 ✭✭


    No words to describe what I'm feeling
    No words
    I'd stopped believing
    An overflowing of emotions
    Like a waterfall
    Still there is nothing to say, nothing at all

    This torrential downpour of pain seems unending
    In shock
    Yet I can feel myself transcending
    I stumble over the hot coals
    My whole life before me
    Away from the wreckage
    You can't ignore me

    Strength rises to the surface
    I must endure this ordeal
    Still no words to convey how wretched I feel
    Fire burning in my eyes
    It's no surprise
    This message in a bottle has come alive
    Salt in the wound
    But I'm starting to heal
    No words
    Done, dusted, sealed


Comments

  • #2
    MojoMaker
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 4,929 ✭✭✭MojoMaker


    Good one snakie. They're getting better girl. Don't be afraid to show 'em.


  • #3
    BEAT
    Hosted Moderators Posts: 5,945 ✭✭✭BEAT


    I agree, I enjoyed that one...keep it up :)


  • #4
    Shad0r
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 1,167 ✭✭✭Shad0r


    I love the rythm of it. Enjoyable reading.


  • #5
    projectmayhem
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 9,480 ✭✭✭projectmayhem


    agree'd, it put pictures in my head, which is what i like in any kind of literature...


  • #6
    villain_97
    Closed Accounts Posts: 39 ✭villain_97


    Thats good stuff!That would make a brilliant unseen poem in next year's Leaving cert


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  • #7
    fizzynicenice
    Closed Accounts Posts: 466 ✭✭fizzynicenice


    thats really good, seriously.
    i wish i had the balls to post here more often but whenever i try to put feeling into words it comes out all tangly and weird and i end up shouting at someone. thank god for good poets


  • #8
    Battlesnake
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 96 ✭✭Battlesnake


    Thanx
    Glad you all enjoyed it.
    :)


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