*native american influenced poem

cat_rant

I am a warrior a child of old
I am a daughter of light and shadow
I dance to the beat of native drums
I here its rythmic flow and feel it rushing through my vains

I am part of one
I hear natures call
The cry of the eagle on the mountain tops
The growl of the wolf protecting her young

I will not be supressed by medication any longer
I am life I am joy
I am estatic shifting energy
My heart beats the rythm of the native drums

I hear my elers calling me to my path
Spider woman weaves her web of infinity that is the unniverse
White shell woman soes the seeds of life giving food in mother earth
Changing woman shows me the many faceted beauty that is myself

I am a child of mother earth
I am part of her fertile depths
With my hands stretched high towards father sky.




opinions...critisism...all welcome personally i feel its not one of my best but i love it all the same.

LegacyUser

run a spell checker before you post them, not trying to be smart, but it would be easier to try to grasp the meaning of a poem without having to wonder what any particular word is or if it's spelled wrongly for a reason.

cat_rant

yeah im sorry im a b*tch for not remembering to do that. thanks for reminding me.

DriftingRain

I think I know your sister!!!!

You write like her!

Good Job... Being American and having a strong Cherokee Indian background, Its touching!



~DR~

p.s. for inspiration read this...
http://wovoca.com/prophecy-white-buffalo-calf-woman.htm

AL][EN

v good peice

well done cat

cat_rant

thanks drifting! and yeah my sis is thead and you know i never thought i did write like her.... thats mad but thanks.