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Poem on transition.

  • 20-03-2004 12:17pm
    #1
    spoofilyj
    Registered Users, Registered Users 2 Posts: 579 ✭✭✭


    This poem just came to me. Not sure I know myself what deeper meaning it might have. Its ment to be abount the changes of life in a year. Just wanted a bit of feedback. Dont think to deep about it . I think i ment it to be light hearted...




    Transition

    A wild and rugged day
    The Trees seem restless in the wind

    The sky a tumble of brused cotton wool
    Falling from North to South

    The leaves are debris to a falled empire
    lost in winters grip.

    Autumn like the leach that sucks the light and
    sickens the days to a shorter existence has died

    Like Falls pawn, Winter too a living halt.

    But Spring returns and the sun has strength like
    a knight in golden armour

    It bursts through the oppressive sky
    and offers to redeme us once more.

    To offer hope and give us Summer!


Comments

  • #2
    toxic_angel
    Closed Accounts Posts: 53 ✭✭toxic_angel


    thats really nice spoofilyj. dunno what deeper
    meaning it has but you have a lovely way wit words. do you write many poems.

    :D


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