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Unaware

Bungalow Bill · 2004-03-12 19:29:15

Unaware I observe in awe, the power of her beauty, her subtle imperfections, her immaculate demeanour. My vision becomes a tunnell, and all irrelevancies are blurred, My cheek becomes slight crimson as a glance is passed in a moment. My love for her is one of distance, Close up, Is she still so fair? Or from far away do I…

12-03-2004 7:29pm

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Bungalow Bill

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Unaware

I observe in awe,
the power of her beauty,
her subtle imperfections, her immaculate demeanour.

My vision becomes a tunnell,
and all irrelevancies are blurred,
My cheek becomes slight crimson
as a glance is passed in a moment.

My love for her is one of distance,
Close up, Is she still so fair?
Or from far away do I just see the outline,
of a beauty that is so unaware.

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#2 12-03-2004 11:15pm

BEAT

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Brilliant! I do not give these out often, well done.
Please share some more

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#3 13-03-2004 8:46pm

Kappar

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That is very beautiful

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#4 15-03-2004 6:35pm

carl carlson

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Thanx guys. It was my first ever attempt.
I write songs more but you tend to end up rhyming something something just so it will all fit.

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#5 15-03-2004 7:21pm

Bungalow Bill

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Sorry that was me. My bro was still logged in

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#6 19-03-2004 9:08pm

Suaimhneach

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I really liked that. Lovely.

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