i need a correction of an english text i wrote please.

lili

like nina simone song "birds flying high (...) the sun in the sky (...) it's a new dawn it's day, it's a new life and i'm feeling good".
all is perfect with matt, he is a sweety husband.
don't worry, he takes care of me.
this weeding and this job symbolise a new start in my life.
now i can forget my gloomy past for ever. but i don't feel that good because i spoke with judge H W Fargo and he said he "had a serious misgiving".
that i could handle the job. i know he was a bit narrow minded but i didn't know he was a conservative. but that man is right, Prosper is a conservative town and people don't accept me like a lauwer.
since i had the job, nobody rely on me and my work. i ask myself how can i show my capacity?
i really want to prove that women can be as efficient as men.




voilà:)
hope i will have an answer soon. thank you:)

pickarooney

Originally posted by lili
Like the Nina Simone song "bird flying high, you know how I feel, sun in the sky, you know how I feel. It's a new dawn, it's a new day, it's a new life and I'm feeling good".
All is perfect with Matt, he is a sweet husband.
Don't worry, he takes care of me.
This wedding and this job symbolise a new start in my life.
Now i can forget my gloomy past forever. But I don't feel that good because I spoke with judge H W Fargo and he said he "had serious misgivings" about my ability to handle the job. I knew he was a bit narrow-minded but i didn't know he was a Conservative. But that man is right, Prosper is a conservative town and people don't accept me as a lawyer.
Since I got the job, nobody has trusted me and my work. I ask myself how I can show my capacity?
I really want to prove that women can be as efficient as men.

lili

wooooooo, almost right!
thank you picka:)