Digital Bigmac (Poem)

Matfinn

Yeah, hi can I get 2 large chips,
2 big macs, some barbeque sauce,
6 chicken nuggets, and 2 cokes.

yeah thats everything, that everything?
ok thanks, how much is that altogether?
13.89, ok thanks.
here do you have change of a tenner?
thanks. ok here you go. thanks very much.

ok do you want to eat this at home or in the car?
i wont get grease all over the seat dont worry!
I got napkins here. ****, i forgot the straws.
ill be back in a minute. bear with me.

passive

uuh...?

coming right up.

projectmayhem

is this a poem or the story of your lunch?

Skud

To be fair you must admire the uniquness of the whole thing. Many poets probably had similar reactions to their works when people found them strange. Even though it is an everyday occurance i think it's not too bad. Don't base a writing career on it though...

Gordon

The fine line between art and madness.

Love it!

Matfinn

I posted something like this to see what kind of reaction would come of it. I just thought of something completely archaic and wanted to see how the public would take it. Its nothing near to my usual writing style. I actually dont write much poetry at all.

The_Scary_Man

If you can get Eminem to rap it I think you could have a hit on your hands.