There's still a lot of work needed for this site.
Core marketing content is missing eg. testimonials/success stories for one. Some of that content is alluded to but not followed through.
If you've ever had the misfortune to have to listen to golfers talking week in, week out, you'll know that they focus on 2 particular matters. Only one of them is addressed in the content and not very well at that. The other isn't mentioned anywhere.
I'd approach the main content area of the homepage differently.
The information architecture could be improved and streamlined.
As already said, the photos don't work.
You and Karl need to get better into the shoes of your potential clients and think in terms of what each of those client markets need and want so they can make a purchase decision.
No mailtos for email addresses.
Make the form layout a regular left aligned one.
Fix the Google map so that it centres properly on the facility, not a few hundred yards to the NNW.
The dropdown menu is displaying under http://karl.swordswebdesign.com/wp-c...l-herbert1.png
. Z-index fix probably needed.
Some links are broken (at the end of main content of About Karl page).
Some phone numbers aren't formatted well, no spaces.
No meta descriptions used afaics.
Spelling mistakes on the homepage.
Kinsealy has one 'l' only.