| 04-01-2010, 21:34 | #16 |
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| 04-01-2010, 22:10 | #18 |
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How about, "Here's One I Made Earlier"?
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| 04-01-2010, 22:49 | #19 |
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Only song I can find atm , need to get to my lyrics book and type some up , just putting this up as I said I would keep my posts one for one with the poet .Great stuff up at the moment
![]() Softly Stilly Sleeping Softly stilly sleeping It’s past the clock of sanity, The one I used before I met you. Caught up in the thoughts that bombard, Want to awaken you from your slumber, It shouldn’t be this hard? You couldn’t be that far under Wake up , wake up , no don’t . Let dreams of stars and happiness Drag you under, with their charm and grace And tell me all about it when you get back to this place. Softly stilly sleeping Right there in my arms, Wondering what place your mind’s created, Have you succumb to happiness’s charms The stars told you yet that your eyes make them think of a friend, Well they would if this was real, is it time to make your journey end? Wake up, wake up, no don’t. You look so peaceful there So I’ll just dote another time, Just a while longer anyway, I really do care Softly stilly sleeping I fell weary by your side Pondering what you saw and in your bliss I hid and I left you to the stars Softly stilly sleeping Softly stilly sleeping You woke me with a kiss, Asked what it was for, You said that, you couldn’t resist. |
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| 04-01-2010, 22:52 | #20 |
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I really love the ending
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| 04-01-2010, 23:55 | #21 |
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| 05-01-2010, 10:32 | #22 |
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Here is a haiku
For all of you to enjoy And look! There is more Damn this thread to hell For showing up my complete Lack of talent. Grrrrrrrr. |
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| 05-01-2010, 11:03 | #23 |
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![]() A painting I finished around a year ago ![]() Not just here to show, looking forward to this thread filling up with awesomeness
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| 05-01-2010, 13:13 | #24 |
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SHAKESPEARE HATES YOUR EMO POETRY
loljk i think you're all awesome. |
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| 07-01-2010, 21:08 | #25 |
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It's been a few days, I suppose I can post another one...
Rhymes of a Bored Teenage Boy Try not to cry as the wasps catch your eye, So close they fly menacingly by and terrify, At heart a child still for a while, just stand Aside and bide your time, you will be fine. Those shouts and screams are not a dream, Although you’re clean it is your team, To the top has risen cream, With the same aim to win big games, Hard you have trained, played through the pain. Cross the ‘T’s and try to please, You aren’t too old to graze your knees, Fall from trees or lose your keys. Thinking thoughts of birds and bees, Just try to breath, don’t drink, she’ll make you Blink as she sinks, the saucy minx And her sexy winks making you think About her kinks. But not to jinx her, Watch her mix bright green elixir And drink it, pretty as a picture. Glad you picked her? Or feel depressed as you get dressed? Forget the pests, clean up your mess, Feather your nest and pass your tests, Prepare yourself to be the best. Then all fades to grey as the day goes away, No more play, at home you stay And wait until the holidays, Then you can say that all’s okay, Turn off the lights, enjoy the night, No time to write as she delights In the sensation of a bite. Life’s alright, why try to fight? The time is right if she is quite Sure that she’s yours, shoes and t-shirt on the floor, You both want more, but please be sure That somebody has locked the door… Wrote this one back in 5th Year, I think. Edit: looking back over this one again, I can see that it still needs a hell of a lot of work... Last edited by Insect Overlord; 07-01-2010 at 21:42. |
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| 07-01-2010, 22:18 | #27 |
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I don't have real talents like the rest of you cunts, but I do draw caricatures.
Does drawing caricatures count as talent? I draw people. I call this work of art here "I had a green marker and a black pen so I drew someone, but couldn't draw eyes. I was on a bus"
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| 07-01-2010, 22:21 | #28 |
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bythewoods I want a caricature now please! That's really good!
The amount of talent in this place is ridiculous... I'm too ashamed to post anything now! But someday I will!
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| 07-01-2010, 22:23 | #29 |
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+2 the hair is really cool!
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