network group for start ups (P . M . A)

[teddy12345]

hi my name is keith i run a company called blue eyes fairs.
i run fairs but the reason i am starting anew tread is to see if any one is interested in a new group that i am starting
called the 330s (so named because walt disny went to 330 banks for money for disny land) the aim of the group is to meet and motivate each other as we start run or improve our bissness and our lifes .
if any one intrested first meating in crown plaza hotel blancherdstown shoping center free their will be a membership fee yearly of 40 euro starting new year sat 12th. 12pm. to 3/4
if you are intrested please PM me with deatials
if u have problems u ned sorted with start ups 2 heads are better than 1
10 better again
no limited to 20 for first meating but hopefuly it will grow
just started a web site (createwithtoughts.com) only new but will improve hoping to use this as a "base" but boards can work for now
thank you for your time

[shoutman]

Hey Teddy
There is already a boards networking group that is free of charge that maybe you could get involved in, there is a sticky in the forum about it so should be near the top.

[dbran]

Hi

Free networks are great but if you are paying a small fee then it covers costs and also people are more motivated to turn up for each meeting if they are paying a little bit.

Emphasis on the word small though!!!!

Regards

dbran

[shoutman]

Well when I say free they pay for the costs of the room between them etc.

[stupidusername]

Not interested in joining this networking group just thought I'd give my two cents on your website, so you can make yourself look a little bit more professional.

Firstly the URL you've included in your post is missing a 'h'. Isn't it meant to be createwiththoughts.com? Assuming it is, I went to that site, just to have a look. You have a number of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, so you really should check it over, or get someone else to, as it makes you look bad.

Assuming you used a template for the site, I'd say 'company message' under the 'CREATE WITH THOUGHTS' heading at the top of every page is meant to be deleted if you don't have a company slogan / quote.

Your 'About us' page contains a YouTube video which is a really bad idea, as no one would expect to / want to see a video about something like that on a page that would generally tell the visitor about the company.

If you fixed all this it'd be much better, although there is more that could be fixed too.

Just an opinion....

[teddy12345]

ta for addavice just made web that day ovisely needs a lot of work lol
am a bit bissy at moment but hope to change a lot about it just bellive in getting things started
alsow seen group that meet from this foarm hope to get to next meeting
but my gropu will be for motivation mostly will be free for first few 1/2 maby 3 times to try get numbers i dont mind payiny for room a few times if it gets going then after that would be about 10euro free tea coffe
will post agenda for met soon
hope to have gest speekers in futher if any one out their all reddy sucseful and wanted to help!! would app. may be able to pay a little

[Lorelei]

If you are going to set up as a professional business then I recommend that you check your spelling every now and again. What is aadavice, ovisely,alsow, bissy,bellive?
Then you might be treated as a serious business your posts seem to be from a 6 year old. Get the English sorted and then I might be interested cannot be bothered translating a 5 year olds message on a business site

[teddy12345]

sorry about that dyslexia and not much time = last post

[teddy12345]

i understand that bad spelling etc. doesn't go down well so will make more time for spell check but i am serious about setting up a group to help each other out. and will run it for free if i have to to get it going
but thanks for advice etc.