I thought to shift the furniture a little by popping up a song with no lyrics and would be interested in any feedback for a number of reasons. 1stly and obviously: is it any good but also is it any other song that I'm not aware of? The reason for asking is I composed it in one go over the space of 25 minutes and in total an hour to get the links etc. in the right place...now this speediness makes me a little suspicious. Maybe it was an existing tune that I've caught in my sub-conscious and I've just replicated it. I honestly think that it came to me and gathered together because it's a simple tune and a good tune but I'm just not 100% sure so I'm a little bit wary of giving it full on cosideration for perfecting. Make sense?
The words are there but not yet exact (but close). I have the story that the song's telling me in full so it's just the little matter of banging a few round pegs into a few square holes.
I'm not really interested in comparisons. For e.g "the style reminds me of (insert whoever's name)" as I find this style of criticism a little lazy and fairly irksome. (Get me! Criticising the critics). I would just would like to know if it is a full on rip-off of a song I'm not fully aware of and if it's not do you think it's any good? You know they way it is with a brand new song- it's hard to see the deadwood for the living trees.
It's recorded a little loose and the fingering ain't so hot but hopefully it's enough for you to get the gist.
I'll put it up as first player on Myspace.