[alfa beta]

Originally Posted by Daemos

Okay, sounds good to me. How about:

The Wheels on the Bus

happy to give that a shot - but unfortunately coz of work commitments it's gonna be wednesday before I'll manage to find a couple of hours to think/write.

tell you what - I'll post a 'formal' acceptance of your challenge here late tonight (tues) and then have something written by wed night - that ok with everyone??

sorry bout that daemos - I'm just completely up the walls with work and stuff at the mo so need to push back slightly.

[Daemos]

No bother at all, take all the time you need

[alfa beta]

thanks daemos

ok - got a bit of time on wed i think - so I'm ready to give your theme a shot

throw up a reply here whenever you see this message and we'll give ourselves 24 hours from that reply

ok?

[Das Kitty]

Missed the vote over the weekend.

I liked both stories, but alfa beta's pipped bluey's for me in spite of lack of puppy. I liked how the topic/theme was used and it caught me by surprise. I think bluey's narrative was more immediate and, eh, storyish, and there was more substance to her character, but the central idea in alfa beta's grabbed me.

Still though, d'awh, puppeh. <3

[bluewolf]

Originally Posted by Das Kitty

I think bluey's narrative was more immediate and, eh, storyish,

hee hee
"Crap, I need a story NOW. 15 mins will do it"

[Agent Weebley]

Jolly good stories bluewolf and alfa beta!

Das Kitty and bluewolf: I hope you realize that Agent Weebley, being the seemingly crazy guy he is, really does care about you, as well as all Irish and ex-pats. He is a humble chap, and won't post anything here about the last stories, but he did make a mention of it here - so it is up to me, it seems . . . [ foxwhistle ]

And since I am right here right here now, it seems that I need to ask Zach Glickman to scopie out his pocketies for his cell phone. I hear he's going phishing, so he'll be needing his phone.

Oh, and the consensus around our neck of the woods was that the puppy was a Golden Lab.

[Daemos]

Originally Posted by alfa beta

thanks daemos

ok - got a bit of time on wed i think - so I'm ready to give your theme a shot

throw up a reply here whenever you see this message and we'll give ourselves 24 hours from that reply

ok?

It's on