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Anyone who writes songs or reviews, just looking for feedback on this song.

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  • 01-04-2013 6:37pm
    #1
    WARRENKEEGAN
    Registered Users Posts: 3 ✭


    This Road

    The days are getting longer
    And the nights are just as cold
    No longer a young girl
    And her dreams are still on hold

    He said he needs her there
    To hold through the night
    He seemed to need it less
    When he saw morning light

    Time will teach us lessons
    Some hit too close to home
    The one she learned tonight
    Has her driving down this road

    She leaves him in the city
    But this road don't lead home
    She knows he'll understand
    What he was never told

    Time will teach us lessons
    Some hit too close to home
    The one she learned tonight
    Has her driving down this road

    Her dreams no longer on hold....


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    #2
    Len_007
    Registered Users Posts: 568 ✭✭✭Len_007


    Got a recording of it?


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    #3
    sleepyheadh
    Banned (with Prison Access) Posts: 582 ✭✭✭sleepyheadh


    decent, if you just played a really droning G - Cadd9 progression right the way through. clean up the chorus, and it would be ok


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    sephsleft06
    Registered Users Posts: 103 ✭✭sephsleft06


    should there be more variation in line length?


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    #5
    Knex*
    Registered Users Posts: 22,477 ✭✭✭✭Knex*


    Messed around with this on guitar during my lunchbreak. Enjoyed the lyrics and found playing a variation of C, G, Am, and F it worked for me.

    Would love to hear how the OP intends it, though. Any recording?


    Edit: Changed it to C#m, E, F#m, and A, and it changed it a lot, actually.


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