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Poem I'm working on

  • 15-05-2013 12:30am
    #1
    pinky 06
    Registered Users Posts: 140 ✭✭


    Hi, first time poster here so please go easy on me! :) I'd appreciate any feedback.

    Tangled Trees

    I remember when you used to smile.
    Blue skies, fluffy clouds and that spark in your eyes.
    Sunlight and happiness and not a care in the world.
    Laughing and dancing through a beautiful life.


    I remember when you used to surprise.
    Bustling through life like we had no time.
    Cities and buildings, flashes of light.
    Running and leaping around the world.


    Used to

    Used to, used to, used to.

    I remember when you used to make me cry.
    I definitely remember that spark in your eyes.
    Dark clouds and thunder and blood on the trees.
    Sadness and regret and pitiful pleads.

    I remember.


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